I had to literally force myself to read this book all the way through to the end. The first volume in this series (Time Police Vol. 1 - Vanished) was not the best of books, and the fact that this type of book is far from my normal read did not help matters. I knew nothing about the author, Warren Norwood, when I picked up these two books at a book swap, but his bio in the book indicates he grew up reading Tom Swift books - thus, as a series-book collector myself, I thought this might mean the story would be enjoyable. Well, sadly, the first book was overly convoluted, highly repetitive, and not that interesting at all, despite its time-travel premise. Since I had the second book on my shelf, I figured I might as well read it and get it out of the way, so I could move on to much better things.
Trapped! (with the explanation point, mind you) takes place a year or so after the events in the first book. Jackson Dubchek had walked away from the whole time-travel business, not wanting to be involved in whatever it is the Time Police are doing and having no interest in aiding the Mnemosynes in their quest to preserve what they believed to be the real history of the world. As can be expected, all of that time manipulation brings Jackson back into the thick of things, as his brother's wife has somehow disappeared, and no one remembers her at all - it's like she never existed! Jackson's own memories of Ann are slowly fading, and with his brother going out of his mind with grief, Jackson knows he must do something. As such, he winds up with the Mnemosynes again, and before they agree to help him, he must do some things for him, which includes going back in time to the 1940s to determine if the whispers about a second World War and the atrocities committed by the German people are true stories or just fairy tales created by someone's imagination.
This time around, there is no real characterization at all (except for the addition of Suzanne Brelmer's mother, who has apparently become addicted to pain drugs in order to relief the horrific pain she endures on a daily basis - a pain that neither her daughter, nor her husband - a high official in the ranks of the Time Police, who also happens to be Suzanne's superior!). The story just jumps from one point in time to another, with only a flimsy plot thread holding them all together - Jackson's search for some clue about what happened to his sister-in-law, all while trying to evade the soldiers from the Time Police who want to capture him, or even worse: kill him. I will say, though, I do like that we get more of the costumer from the Time Police in this one - an unusual ally of Jackson and Suzanne. Paress Linnet is probably the shining star of this book, for me anyway, and I would absolutely love to have seen more of her. Sadly, she is only used as a plot device, to whisk Jackson to safety when he is nearly captured by the Time Police, and later, providing Jackson and Suzanne with the necessary clothing and money for them to use when they travel back in time.
The time loop connected to Wheeling, West Virginia and a certain junk yard owned by two stereotypical redneck hillbillies rears its ugly ahead again in this book, not just once, but twice. Poor Jackson finds himself thrown into that same location he was thrown into in the last book, only this time, instead of facing down the two rednecks at gunpoint, he inadvertently winds up in the back of their pick up truck and takes an unexpected trip to a local watering hole, where he faces a Time Police officer in the bathroom and steals a car in order to find his way back to the junk yard so he can charge up his machine and get the heck out of dodge! These side trips feel unnecessary and more like padding to lengthen the story out - there is no real point to them at all.
Jackson's trip to the concentration camps of Nazi Germany and Suzanne's trip to Woodstock in the hopes of finding drugs that can help her mother cope with the pain she is living with could have been built up much more than what they were - neither trip seems to have any lasting impact on the characters (other than introducing another time traveler who throws a wrench into Jackson and Suzanne's "will they or won't they?" relationship). Again, some missed chances here to really flesh out the characters and let the readers see how these trips are impacting their lives. Instead, they just jump from one time to another, with no time for reflection or even a chance to breathe.
This book ends on a cliffhanger, leaving poor Jackson stranded in the past with no time machine to take him home or anywhere else. A third book was published, so I'm assuming Norwood figured out some way to rescue his character from being stranded (which, coincidentally enough, is the title to the third book); but, I will never know, as I have no intention of picking up the third book. A fourth book was solicited, but it was never actually published, from what I could find. This series, for me, is lacking in any clear direction, and seems like nothing more than an opportunity for the author to throw his characters around in time in the hopes the readers will love all the back and forth. The cover, once again with art provided by the Youll brothers, is less appealing than the first book. The scene is something that does not even appear in the book, and the visual for the time machine is not at all what is described in the story. Whether that is the publisher's fault for not providing the artist with clear parameters, or if it was simply the artist painting his own artistic vision for what he (they?) thought the future should look like - who knows...
This book was published in January 1989, just two months after the first one. I would not recommend these books, even to those who like time-travel or general sci-fi adventure stories, unless you like stories that are overly convoluted, repetitious, and lacking in any in-depth characterization - in that case, these books are for you.
RATING: 5 Roman daggers of timeless design out of 10 for at least attempting to write a tale of time paradoxes and the dangers of messing with time.










