I remember growing up and seeing various Whitman books on the shelves at K-Mart and Kresge and Woolworth's, and I always thought they were sub-par books, not at the same level as series books, such as Nancy Drew, Hardy Boys, etc. It seemed to me (as a kid, anyway) that the quality of the Whitman books were not as high as those from Grosset & Dunlap. As an adult, however, my views on this have changed. I have come to realize that while Whitman may have used lesser quality paper, and they may not have offered series with the longevity of Nancy Drew or Hardy Boys; yet, I've been finding in recent years that the stories are actually not bad at all - in some instances, equal to, or even superior to, some of those Grosset & Dunlap series! Now, that being said, this particular book is one I passed on many times when I saw it in antique malls and used book stores. One day, though, I happened across a copy of the book in excellent condition, with a tight binding, and for a relatively inexpensive price, so I thought - why not?
Make-Believe Daughter does not sound like the title to a mystery; and, although it is tagged as a mystery on the cover (in two places: along the top, it says "A Whitman Mystery," while under the title, it says "A Mystery Featuring THE THREE MATILDAS"), the story itself does not have much of a mystery to it - in fact, the first hint of the mystery does not come into play until after page 100! The first half of the book reads more like a "malt-shop" story, as readers are introduced to Matilda Sterling - a young girl who lives in an apartment building over Brackenbat's International Restaurant in New York City. She lives with her parents, and the older couple who run the restaurant (who live in the apartment just above the restaurant, while Matilda and her parents live in the apartment above that) are "Uncle" Tor and "Aunt" Alma. They allow Matilda - or Tilda, as she is called - to stay in the restaurant and do homework every day after school until her parents get home from work. Tilda's one wish is that she had friends in her area with whom she could hang out. Sadly, Tor and Alma Brackenbat have no children, nor does Louis Confrere, the single French man who lives in the apartment above Tilda's family. The top floor apartment is empty, and Tilda believes it is haunted, the way people move in and out so quickly.
The story begins with Mr. Confrere's dilemma - he has told his aunt, his only living relative who still lives in France, that he is married and has a daughter named Matilda. A daughter the same age as and who looks just like Tilda! This would not be a problem, except Aunt Therese is now coming for a visit and wants to meet his daughter! Tilda rather likes the idea of pretending to be the Frenchman's make-believe daughter, but her parents are not amenable to the lie. And that's when we, the readers, meet the second Matilda - also known as Mat. The young girl is there in the restaurant when Tilda comes running in from the rain after school. Tilda quickly learns that the girl has been raised in the circus, where her father worked until he died. The circus fortune teller dropped her off at the international restaurant, and when she does not come back, Mat gives Uncle Tor a letter that reveals the fortune teller has no intention of coming back, asking the bearer of the letter to take Mat in and give the young girl a proper life! Of course, Tor and Alma readly agree to take her in, and Tilda is thrilled to have a girl her own age in the building. It seems things are working out for the girls ...
Enter: the red-headed Matilda! Before you can blink an eye, a new family is moving into that top-floor apartment. Big Chief, the huge red-headed man who is an artist, with his son, Genius (not his real name, nor does it accurately describe his intelligence, or lack thereof!), his wife (called nothing more than "Mother"), and Red-Top, which is the third Matilda's nickname. An unusual family, but Red-Top just happens to be the same age as the other two Matildas, and as such, the Three Matildas are formed!
The book merely follows the day-to-day lives and adventures of the three Matildas until Aunt Therese arrives. It is while at the docks where the huge boat has brought Mr. Confrere's aunt and many other travelers that the mystery begins. Tilda notices a man in a grey suit appears to be following Aunt Therese, and while she does not like his face, nor the smell of his suit (she eventually realizes it is the smell of mothballs!), she keeps her concerns to herself, as the families welcome Aunt Therese into their building. Tilda might have forgotten about the man, except she sees him again in the Brackenbat International Restaurant the same night a dinner party is thrown in celebration of Aunt Therese's arrival. She soon forgets about him, though, as summer vacation begins, and the three Matildas explore New York City with their new "aunt." A decision is eventually made to take a three-week trip in August across the United States, and it is during that trip that the mystery man makes more appearances, and the actual mystery starts to develop. But, if you are expecting to have any idea what the mystery actually is, don't get your hopes up. The actual mystery is revealed in the last two chapters, and it is so quick, you might miss it if you blink! It's rather a shame we did not get any kind of hint as to the mystery earlier in the story, as it might have actually made it a bit less out of left-field.
One aspect of the book I did rather enjoy was the distinctly different characteristics for each of the Three Matildas. Tildy, with the light brown hair, was the more curious one; Mat, with the black hair and big hoop earrings, was the serious one; and Red-Top, with the red hair and jump rope, was the playful one. Each was her own individual, and they actually complemented one another within the context of the story, thus making a simple story more interesting than it otherwise could have been.
The author is Laura W. Douglas, and I'm not sure if this is a real person or a pseudonym (although I'm leaning toward a real person). What I was surprised to discover, when I went searching for information on Ms. Douglas, is that she authored a book I already have in my possession, The Mystery at Crooknose. That particular book is aimed at an older audience than this one. I also found she wrote a third book titled The Mystery of Arrowhead Hill, which I do not have - but which I plan to hunt down and buy. Both Crooknose and Arrowhead were published in various formats, including paperbacks under Airmont's "Mystery House" banner. There were no other "Three Matilda" books published, which is rather a shame, as this one ends with Big Chief making an announcement that clearly was intended to be a set up for a second book (and a story that I would have loved to have read!).
The illustrations in the book are by Al Fiorentino, who was a talented painter / artist who received his training at the Museum of School Art in Philadelphia. He worked as a commercial illustrator before becoming freelance in 1960. A number of children's books containing his art can be found on eBay or other sites. His work on Make-Believe Daughter is very well done, each illustration being careful to fully depict the scenes from the book down to some of the smallest details (such as Mat's dog stretching its front legs as the girl is getting acquainted with her new room in Tor and Alma's apartment). A great choice of artist for this book!
RATING: 8 white mice rescued from a garbage can out of 10 for a uniquely fun concept that definitely deserved more than just one book!











