Nancy Drew: The Secret of Bridleway House (a Fan Fiction mystery)

I first heard about this book on Facebook, in a fan group to which I belong.  Since the first our Nancy Drew books went into public domain, it seems quite a few people have been publishing their own versions of those books, with various covers (many with AI-generated art).  This, however, is the first all-new story that is taken from those early books, with an attempt to tell the story in the way those first few books did.  While the published book does not identify the writer or artist, Amazon lists the author as "Jared Raymond Vuolo," who was also the person who posted about this book in the fan group, which brought it to my attention.  Sadly, his promotion of the book brought some negative comments from people, and any posts about the book have been met with immediate moderation of the post.  My friend, Kevin, read the book and said he rather enjoyed it (pointing out he had a few problems with it, things I also noticed which will be mentioned below), so I figured I might as well give it a chance.  After all, with the stories coming out from Simon & Schuster these days, this fan-written story could not be all that bad...

 

The Secret of Bridleway House is, in many ways, a tale of Gothic mystery and suspense.  It has the old mansion, filled with hidden rooms, a light in the upper tower, and more mysteries than you can throw a stick at.  It has the Whitcombe family, who have lived in the house for generations, but a long-ago feud between brothers has resulted in dark secrets that hold everyone in the family captive.  It has a mysterious stranger with a hat, grey coat, and gloves that seems to be able to slip in and out without anyone every catching him.  And it has a young woman who becomes central to it all, determined to reveal all of the secrets and prevent a villainous evil from destroying the family's legacy - and that woman, of course, is Nancy Drew!  Even the cover art somewhat resembles those old Gothic covers from the 1960s and '70s, with the young woman in the foreground, the old house in the background, a light shining from one of its windows, and a shadowy man watching in the distance.  The book definitely has all the elements for a good old-fashioned, spooky mystery. 

 

The story centers around the sale of Bridleway House.  Elderly Mrs. Whitcombe is set to sell the house, with Victor Hale representing the interests of the purchasers.  But Carson Drew has found some irregularities with the history of the property's title, and with his daughter's help, he intends to clear it up so the sale can go through.  But Nancy quickly begins to realize something is amiss.  Pertinent papers disappear or are torn, so only small portions remain.  A aging photograph of the family goes missing from her father's briefcase.  And with every clue she finds, it leads her to another; however, each and every time, she gets there just a moment too late, with someone staying one step ahead of her.  Thus, with only bits and pieces of clues, and with Victor Hale insistent the sale move forward as planned, claiming the issues with title are only imagined, Nancy has little time left to uncover the truth about what happened all those years ago and what promise was made regarding the property boundaries.  (Plus, just for good measure, there's that little discrepancy of the birth date for one of Mrs. Whitcombe's ancestors - and the truth about that changes everything about the situation - literally!)

 

The cover art and the interior art are clearly created by AI.  There's no denying how gorgeous it is, and I am certainly not against independent authors like this using AI to help spruce up their work with art.  But There are a few issues that I wish the author had caught before sending this through to publication.  First, while I love that every chapter has an illustration to go with it, the fact that sixteen of the twenty illustrations show Nancy with other people bent over a desk or other object looking at a clue makes the reader feel like they are looking at the same image, just different setting.  There were a number of scenes throughout the story that would have made much more exciting illustrations, so I'm unsure why the same basic scene was chosen for each chapter.  The illustrations for chapters two and three are different, and they display tense moments when Nancy sees (or thinks she sees) someone in an upstairs window (chapter two) and when she hears footsteps behind her (chapter three).  Second is the illustration for chapter nine.  While I love that it plays on the cover art for the original Lilac Inn,  I had a chuckle at an obvious error in the AI-generated art - Nancy's left arm is leaning up against the all next to the window, with her hand grabbing on to the molding around the window pane - the only problem is, that hand is a right hand, not a left hand (the thumb is not in the proper place!).  A great reminder that if one is going to use AI-generated art, one must be careful to review it before using it.

 

 As far as the story itself - I have seen some comments on Amazon and in the groups that allege this book is entirely AI-generated.  I obviously cannot say for sure, but having read the story from beginning to end, I am more likely to believe this was written by human hand and not computer created.  Yes, there are some repetitive scenes (for instance, numerous times in the story Victor Hale gets frustrated and makes snarky comments, to which either Nancy or someone else calls him out, and he then glares in silence - this happens almost in every chapter), but I did not find the dialogue unrealistic or choppy, as some have claimed.  In fact, I thought the author did rather nicely with keeping Nancy pretty much in-character, as someone not afraid to stand her ground and filled with determination to help others.  (I do think, however, he made her a bit overly cautious - the Nancy Drew I know would have gladly taken the risks and ignored her father's warnings and climbed up into the upper tower room without waiting for the stairs to be confirmed safe to climb.)  The tension builds slowly, and the mysterious stranger that seems to appear here and there, but remains elusive until the end, is well-played.   Overall, it's not a bad read, and it has the "feel" of some of the early Nancy Drew books.

 

Now, that being said, I do have some major questions about the time period of this book.  Based on the hairstyles and clothing, I would guess the story must be set sometime in the 1940s; however, if you pay close attention to the dates in the story, this could not possibly be the case.  Mrs. Whitcombe is described as "small, silver-haired" and stands "with the help of a polished cane," as "age had bent her shoulders" (pp. 19-20).  Such a description would seem to indicate the matriarch is in her 60s at the very least.  Then, taking into account that Silas Whitcombe, Mrs. Whitcombe's grandfather, was born in 1871 and did not marry until 1898 ... and Adelaide Margaret Whitcombe (the aunt for whom Mrs. Whitcombe was named) was not born until 1901 ... then in order for Mrs. Whitcombe to be, at the very least, in her 60s, then the time frame for this story would have to be in the 1980s or thereafter.  Yet, the descriptions in the story and the dialogue definitely give this more of a '40s or even '50s feel.  I give the author credit - he carefully avoids any references that could potentially date the story, making the story, in a way, "timeless," allowing the reader to identify whatever time period they would like with the story.

 

Last, but not least, I applaud the author's subtle drops of Easter eggs throughout the book to the various Nancy Drew mysteries over the years.  There are references to old clocks, hidden staircases, candles (albeit, not twisted), oak trees, old attics, trunks (although not specifically brass-bound), etc.  Each one I happened upon made me smile, as the references were distinctly a part of the story, yet gives readers a very nice nod to the classic stories read and loved by millions.

 

Would I recommend this book?  I would have to say yes, as long as it is read in the spirit in which it was apparently written - as an homage to the classic Nancy that so many fans love.   With any luck, we'll get a sequel to this one of these days.

 

RATING:  8 inscribed antique compasses out of 10 for giving fans a "vintage" type Nancy Drew story that is fresh and enjoyable1 

The Brownie Scouts at Silver Beach - Book Five of the Brownie Scout Books

It's a week at the beach for the Brownies in Mildred Wirt's fifth Brownie Scouts adventure (I hesitate to call this a "mystery" series, as the books are more about the young girls' adventures and learning experiences than they are about the actual mystery aspect of the stories).  I have to admit, this series has been a much more enjoyable read than I had originally anticipated.  A series about a group of pre-teen girls who are enjoying outings as Brownie Scouts did not exactly scream out to me as readable stories, and the only reason I actually bought them was because (a) they were all purchased relatively cheap, with their dust jackets in tact, and (b) it was another Mildred Wirt series.  I just assumed they would sit on my shelves, unread.  But, when a friend suggested I read and post about them, I thought, "Why not?"  And, quite frankly, I'm glad I did.

 

The Brownie Scouts at Silver Beach finds out favorite little Brownies enjoying the sun and fun at Silver Beach, said to be "along the Atlantic Coast" (p. 3).  Veve (whose spelling is changed to "Vevi" in this book for some reason) McGuire and Connie Williams are once again front and center in the story, with Jane Tuttle, Sunny Davidson, and Rosemary Fritche rounding out the troop.  Miss Gordon, the troop leader, is, of course, on the scene, as is Mrs. Williams, Connie's mother, who is helping to chaperone the girls.  Vevi and Connie are bunked with Mrs. Williams in the rental, Starfish Cottage, while the other girls are staying with Miss Gordon in a "vine-covered cottage overlooking Silver Beach" (p. 3) that the troop leader owns.  By the end of the first chapter, we get the beginnings of a mystery, when Miss Gordon's watch, which she left in the pocket of her beach robe with the rest of the troop's belongings on the sandy beach while they enjoyed the ocean water, is stolen!

 

Readers quickly learn there have been other thefts recently in that area of the beach, which has caused a number of summer visitors to migrate over to the beach belonging to a nearby hotel.  That mystery, however, is put to the side as the girls begin to explore the beach, discover shells, discuss the various types of water birds seen in the area, watch a turtle race, and discover a small house built to look like a ship not far from their cottages.  Along the way, Vevi and Connie get lost in the fog (which is when they stumble across the ship-shaped cottage and discover another mystery - who is using the small house as a place to stay?), the girls have fun adventures trying to catch a turtle so they can enter the next turtle race, they collect shells so that they can put together and showcase a shell display, and they learn all about carrier pigeons, with Vevi nearly getting her very own pigeon that she names Snow White!  And during all of these fun activities, the girls also hear about more thefts and inadvertently witness the thief on more than one occasion attempting to steal items from tourists who are visiting the beach.  Even worse, poor Vevi and Connie wind up on a boat put adrift at sea, with no one knowing where they are!

 

The mysteries, as usual, are not overly complicated, nor are they difficult to solve (at least, for the discerning reader).  The identity of the thief is not at all hard to spot, pretty much from the get-go.  The identity of the person using the ship-shaped cottage is also easy to figure out, as Wirt does not make it hard to see where the story is going.  The mixture of the two lifeguards, the former ship captain, the young boy whose father is a lifeguard at the other hotel, and the man who handles the homing pigeons are fairly straight-forward characters who may be able to hide all of their secrets from the Brownie Scouts, but none of them are so subtle that even a casual reader could not spot them a mile away.  None of that detracts from the enjoyment of the story, though - it's not about actually solving the mysteries; rather, it's more about following along with Vevi, Connie, and the other Brownies as they hop from one exciting escapade to another.

 

Wirt casually included a moment in the story that is definitely a very valuable teaching lesson for young children.  When Vevi and Connie venture out to find Cabell's pond, where there are said to be lots of turtles to be found, a layer of mist begins to roll in from the ocean as dusk draws near.  As they are walking, a "driver stopped for a moment offering the girls a ride.  Vevi and Connie did not know him, so they turned down the offer" (p. 23).  A shining example of the old maxim, "never get in a car with a stranger."  I smiled when I read these lines, thinking how smart Wirt was to integrate a moral lesson into the story without making it overly obvious and beating you over the head with it.  One has to wonder how many children read this back in the day and took this lesson to heart.

 

There is another scene, however, that caught my attention more than the "stranger danger" scenario.  When Miss Gordon and Mrs. Williams take the girls to Brant's Point for a picnic and for an opportunity to search for more shells, the tide starts to come in before they realize it, and soon enough, Mrs. Williams' car is stuck in the sand, unable to get any traction.  As the tide gets closer and closer, my mind kept telling me, "I've read this scene before - but where?"  Thanks to the memory of a very good friend, I found it - in Wirt's Penny Parker mystery, Voice from the Cave.  In that book, Penny and Louise are on a beach near a lighthouse (same as the Brownies are in this book), and like the Scouts, Penny's car gets stuck and the high tide keeps coming in with no help in sight.  The similarities do not stop there:

 

PP 95 - "Even if the car isn't washed away, the salt water will ruin it."

BS 88 - "Salt water ruins a car very easily ... We must get out somehow."

 

PP 95 - The motor began to labor.  Then the car stalled completely.

BS 85-86 - Slower and slower crept the car, its engine laboring ... The car would not budge...

 

PP 95 - "I'll run to the lighthouse," Penny decided desperately...

BS 88 - She glanced hopefully toward the lighthouse.  Connie offered ro un there and ask for help.

 

PP 97 - Penny and Louise seek help from a man they know who is wading through the reef; he sees them, but he turns and walks away

BS 90 - The Brownies seek help from a lifeguard they see in a boat out in the ocean; he sees them, but he turns and speed away in his boat

 

PP 99 - Jerry Livingston shows up on the beach and helps the girls push the car out of the sand

BS 91 - Captain Tarwell shows up on the beach and helps the girls push the car out of the sand

 

The scenes so closely resemble one another, only the names have been changed and some of the wording.  As the Penny Parker book was published in 1944, and this one in 1952, so perhaps Wirt "borrowed" the scene from the earlier book with the thought that readers of this particular book (who would be younger than the intended audience of the Penny Parker book published eight years prior) would not recognize the passage.  (Wirt seems to have had no problem in lifting scenes from previously published books of hers and retooling them into later stories - her Madge Sterling series provided her with a plethora of scenes that she later used in her Penny Parker books, her Mystery Stories for Girls books, and others.)

 

Marguerite Gayer provided both the cover art and interior illustration (the frontis piece being the only interior art) for this book.  The cover art actually depicts a scene related to the mystery surrounding the thefts at the beach, as the girls find a stolen purse buried in the sand (p. 146).  Meanwhile, the interior illustration merely shows the scene where Vevi and Connie happen across the small cottage in the mist while trying to find the pond (p. 34).

 

RATING:  8 dusty old Bibles out of 10 for keeping the Brownies faithful to their code, always helping others, while also learning about nature and valuable lessons at the same time.

Barnabas Collins - the 6th Paperback Library Gothic Novel based on ABC-TV's suspense drama (Dark Shadows)

And we finally reach the introduction of Barnabas Collins in the Paperback Library Gothic book series.  Published in November 1968, well over a year after Jonathan Frid first appeared as the vampire on the television show back in April 1967.  I'm not really sure why it took the book series so long to catch up to the television show, character-wise; perhaps because the character was never intended to be long-lasting (originally he was intended only for a 13-week stint, and then he was to be killed off), or maybe it was simply that the books were more Gothic than supernatural.  Whatever the reason, it was clear the character of Barnabas Collins was a huge hit on the TV show, so thus, it would only make sense the publisher would want the best-selling character to appear in the books.  Of course, this meant reducing the role that Victoria Winters plays in the books, and to me, that was a major loss...

 

(It should be noted that the month this book was published was the same month that Alexandra Moltke, the actress who originated the role of Victoria Winters in the television show, left Dark Shadows, being replaced briefly by Betsy Durkin and then Carolyn Groves, before the character was completely written out in January 1969.)

 

Barnabas Collins is the sixth book in this series, and it introduces readers to the Barnabas Collins of this book series, which I have come to believe is simply another of the many parallel times that exist within that room deep within Collinwood's haunted halls.  Rather than introducing Barnabas by having Willie Loomis try to rob his gave, only to get an unexpected surprise, we get instead a story told by the ghost of Elizabeth and Roger's grandmother of events that took place at the turn of the 20th century.  In the book universe, there is no Willie Loomis, there is no Mrs. Johnson, and we barely see David Collins and Carolyn Stoddard.  Victoria Winters, who has been the main focus of the first five books, now takes a back seat, as she appears only in the prologue and epilogue, as she sits with Elizabeth to listen to the story of "Barnabas Collins," a name she happens to see while reading a journal of one Jonas Collins.  Elizabeth knows scant details, only what her grandmother told her. With the first chapter, we get a brief introduction of Margaret Collins, whose spirit speaks from beyond the grave to tell the full story of what happened back in 1902 and the ensuing years...

 

Jonas Collins is the head of the family, and his wife Margaret is the mistress of Collinwood.  Their grown son is off on his own, and the only other member of the family on the estate is their invalid daughter, Greta.  Ross never actually states what disease the poor girl has, but she is confined to a wheelchair and said repeatedly to be in poor health.  While not a happy household, there is no real unhappiness - merely melancholy and acceptance.  An elderly housekeeper remains on the property (Granny Entwhistle), as do the sister maids, Ada and Patience Griffin.  The family retains a houseboy, Luke Sinnot, who is mentally handicapped, as well as an unnamed groom.  All is normal and routine on the estate until the day he appears.  While standing at Widow's Hill, looking out over the ocean, she feels his presence, before she sees him.  Barnabas Collins.  An enigmatic man who claims to be the descendant of the original Barnabas Collins, who has come home to the family estate for some peace and quite to conduct "experiments" without interruption (this is the excuse he gives why they will never see him during the day, and why he cannot be disturbed in the Old House).  As you might suspect, once Barnabas arrives, everything changes.

 

Greta is instantly drawn to her cousin, particularly when he shows her special attention, remarking on her resemblance to Josette Collins (gee, can you see where this is going?).  Jonas is just happy to have someone renting the Old House.  Margaret, on the other hand, cannot make up her mind about their new found family member.  He is cordial enough, but there is something about him that unsettles her.  And his servant, Hare, is an ogre of a man, said to be both deaf and mute and rather rough when it comes to strangers.  Then there is Granny Entwhistle.  She is old enough to just barely remember stories of the original Barnabas Collins.  She knows the rumors.  She knows the stories.  And she knows evil when she sees it.  She tries to warn them.  She tries to help them.  But in the end, it does her no good - especially when she ends up dead at the bottom of the stairs to the third floor!

 

This book definitely has a body count.  The Barnabas Collins of this book is similar in nature to the Barnabas Collins as he was originally introduced on the television show.  He has a welcoming, cordial facade that hides a determined, sinister nature that is willing to do anything necessary to achieves his goals.  What did surprise me was how Ross integrated Barnabas' origin into the book, providing just a few scattered details here and there about Angelique being a witch, tricking Josette into believing she loved Jeremiah, and ultimately cursing Barnabas with eternal life as a vampire after he shoots her and she believes she is dying.  Ross even references the duel between Barnabas and Jeremiah - but in this parallel universe, Ross reveals that Jeremiah did not die, and neither he nor Barnabas were severely wounded (p. 73).  And that's it.  While the show spent weeks in 1795, giving viewers a detailed look at how Barnabas came to be the man he is, the book spends only a few sentences.  Clearly, Ross (and likely the publishers, as well) believed those who read these books would already be familiar enough with the television drama that they did not need to repeat what was already.

 

There are some things in the story that are worth mentioning.  When Barnabas first arrives at Collinwood, he talks about how little the estate has changed, saying "Still the sad setting for the widow's wail and the appearance of the Phantom Mariner" (p. 15).  The legend of the phantom mariner was used as a plot device in the fourth book in this series, The Mystery of Collinwood.  It is actually pretty great to see that Ross manages to keep some continuity in his books.  There is also the moment when Margaret discovers the truth about Barnabas' real nature, when she sees him and Greta go past "the great mirror by the door" and is shocked to see that "there had been no reflection of Barnabas Collins at all!" (p. 39).  This is obviously a nod to the television series, in which Dr. Julia Hoffman uncovers Barnabas' secret when she finds he has no reflection in the mirror of her compact she is using (Episode 288).

 

One aspect of the story that really bothered me while reading this was the introduction of young Judith, a child who Barnabas decides he is going to adopt, mostly because of her strong resemblance to a young Josette DuPres Collins.  This was extremely uncomfortable, because Ross has Barnabas inform Margaret of his reason for adopting her:  "In ten years, little Judith could become my bride.  In the interim I'll see she has the life of a rich man's daughter.  Every luxury and advantage will be given to her.  So in the end she will be the same great lady Josette was" (p. 77).  I don't know about you, but the fact that a grown man is looking at a little girl (no more than 8 or 9 years old!) and envisioning this child as his future wife bothers me considerably.  I am surprised not only that Ross would incorporate such a thing into his story, but that the publisher / editor would allow it be stand as written!  It almost makes Barnabas come across as a sexual predator, and I think the story would have been better without this aspect in it.

 

The story was a definitely different take on the introduction of television's greatest vampire, and aside from that one uncomfortable plot element, it was a fairly good read.

 

RATING:  7 sapphire star pendants out of 10 for providing readers an entirely new tale of Barnabas Collins' arrival at the great house of Collinwood, riddled with vampire attacks and coffins in the basement! 

Nancy Drew Mystery Stories # 145 - The Missing Horse Mystery

"Danger's riding high ... and Nancy's in its path!" (cover blurb)

 

"A search for a missing horse leads Nancy to a dark discovery!" (back cover blurb)

 

I've noticed a trend in recent digests that I have read that seems to lean toward more mature mysteries, often using deadly weapons and individuals within the stories becoming gravely injured.  Two of the last three books that I've read involved serious attempts on Nancy's life, well beyond the normal foibles of getting knocked unconscious or run off the road - and this book is no exception.  I've often heard people say that once the Nancy Drew Files ended in 1997, some unused manuscripts and plots were integrated into the digests; and, after reading these recent bout of Nancy Drew Mystery Stories (142, 143, and now 145), I would have to agree.  These plots definitely seem more fitting for the older audience at which the Files were aimed.

 

The Missing Horse Mystery takes Nancy, Bess, and Ned to the Illinois Horse Park for the Midwest Grand Prix Dressage Championship. Surprisingly, there appears to be an actual Illinois Horse Park located in Triumph, Illinois, made up of approximately 80 acres of historic farmland about an hour away from Chicago.  Not too often does the Nancy Drew series use actual locations such as this (excepting the use of real cities).  Whether the author intended this to be the same "Illinois Horse Park" or not is unknown.  However, the fact it is specifically set in Illinois once again gives rise to the ongoing consensus that River Heights is located somewhere near Chicago (and since The Case of the Capital Intrigue specifically indicated Chicago is the nearest big city to River Heights, this book simply reiterates it).  George is off-screen in this book, said to be "having a great time teaching at a soccer clinic" (p. 2).  This is another aspect I have been noticing about the series as it progresses:  the ghostwriters appear to prefer using either Bess or George in the stories, not as often using both of Nancy's best friends.  Perhaps the authors simply don't know how to utilize both characters alongside Nancy with these shorter mysteries (this book clocks in at only 147 pages), and so it is easier to use one cohort rather than two.  Even at that, Ned is actually more involved in this mystery than Bess - she meets a foreign competitor named Gunter and spends most of the book going out with him instead of helping Nancy!

 

As with most of these "vacation mysteries," Nancy has come to Illinois Horse Park to enjoy a weekend getaway, not to be involved in a mystery.  Even when she catches wind of a fire in the stables by the end of the first chapter, she resolves not to look for a mystery where there may not be one.  But, of course, as always, there is a mystery, and soon enough, Nancy is in the middle of it.  A valuable horse vanishes, and the groomer is seriously injured and taken to the hospital, where she lies in a coma.  The night before, however, the groomer had given Nancy a small bit of information that plays a very large part in this mystery - in fact, for me, it basically gave away the entire plot and the culprit.  But, I am not the intended age group for reading this kind of mystery, so perhaps the intended readers might not find the clue quite so revealing.

 

The author does throw in a number of possible suspects.  From one of the competitors who has made it clear that he will do anything to win the competition to one or more of the security guards who are not necessarily all they appear to be to rival horse owners who want to win the big prize.  It seems there is quite a lot of money on the line, and the question Nancy must figure out is who benefits the most from the prize horse's disappearance?  Nancy and Ned must face off against some violent rottweilers, and they find themselves at gunpoint, their deaths certain as the real villain lets them know in no uncertain terms that they will not foil his plans.  The grievous blow to the groom's head, the rottweiler attack, the beating of an accomplice, and the threat of gun violence definitely set a much darker tone for this mystery.  The stakes are higher than Nancy Drew's normal cases, and Nancy and Ned take some dangerous chances by sneaking into the security guard's offices, as well as the private offices of another suspect,  However, despite all that danger, Nancy reveals the true criminal by the end of the story (although, surprisingly, she actually believes the crook's excuses several times before realizing what he was truly up to, which is something the Nancy Drew everyone knows and loves is not prone to do!).

 

Interestingly, when talking with their friend, Lee Anne Suna, who invited the girls to come watch the show, Bess makes the comment, "Nan and I have been riding since we were about eight" (p. 9).  I automatically assumed this was a references to the Nancy Drew Notebooks series for young readers, which began about four years prior to the publication of this book in 1998.  In that series, Nancy and her friends are eight years old, and at least two books in that series deal with horses (books 26 and 37).  And, since this book has advertisements in the back for the Nancy Drew Notebooks series, it is an easy assumption that the author, and potentially the publisher as well, wanted to promote that series. 

 

Another somewhat factual point raised within the story is the distance from the Illinois Horse Farm to the Iowa state line, which Nancy and Ned must cross over in order to follow-up on a clue.  Nancy casually mentions to Bess that "Ned and I are going to tour a farm in Iowa," (p. 103), leading one to believe it could not be far, if they planned to simply "visit" the farm and be back the same day.  When the two actually head out, it is stated the farm was only about "a half hour's drive" (p. 110).  In reality, Triumph, Illinois (the home of the Illinois Horse Farm) is approximately 83 miles from the closest point of the Iowa state line - so, for Nancy and Ned to make it to that point in a half hour would have to mean they were driving nearly 160 miles per hour!  (Of course, they are not in the real world, so in the book, the Illinois Horse Farm must have been located considerably closer to the state line...)

 

The ghostwriter for this particular mystery is Alison Hart.  If this is the same Alison Hart who has written a number of horse-related novels, including books in the Horse Diaries series, then it would not be surprising, considering the subject matter of this book.  This is actually the fifth of six books that Ms. Hart has written for the series (the other being Magnolia Mansion, Stranger in the Shadows, Masked Rider, Twin Teddy Bears, and Gold Doubloons).  The cover art is again provided by Ernie Norcia, depicting a scene early on, when Nancy smells smoke and releases a horse from its stall where the first has been set (p. 11).

 

Not a bad read, but as indicated above, the solution was given away too early.  Better than a number of the digests, but not within my top ten.

 

RATING:  7 long metal rasps with blood on it out of 10 for trying to mislead readers with several very unlikable characters who you would almost want to be the villain of the story! 

A Zebra Mystery Puzzler #33 - Who's Next?

This thirty-third entry into the Zebra Mystery Puzzler series is the second book authored by Joan Allan, whose true identity remains a secret (although there is a clear connection with author Martin A. Grove, who wrote a number of books in this series under the pseudonym "Marjorie Grove").  While the first book by Allan, Who Killed Me?, has a dedication to "Marjorie, Martin and Geoffrey Eric Grove," this book has a dedication to Marjorie and Geoffrey - with Martin noticeably missing!  Once again, this begs the question as to whether "Joan Allan" is just another pseudonym for Grove himself.  In any event, this book sees the return of advertising executive Valerie Lambert, who must play amateur sleuth once again when faced with an ever-growing pile of dead bodies!

 

Who's Next? takes Valerie and her assistant, Oscar Fryman (known simply as "Fry"), to Paris, France, where they are to meet with the owner of her agency's latest client, Abbe-Roi, a vineyard famous for its champagne that is hoping to break into the American market.  Joining Val and Fry for the trip is wine expert Franklin Hertford, an Englishman who has agreed to offer his expertise to assist Val in coming up with a campaign for Abbe-Roi.  While there for the weekend, the trio are staying with their host at a rather lavish - and, coincidentally, very isolated - chateau that once belonged to the original owner of the land - Pierre Alexandre Saulnier, who was brutally murdered on the property and who is said to still haunt the halls of the somewhat worn down homestead.  No one believes in ghosts, of course, but for Val, it does set the mood for what is about to be a terrifying weekend!

 

Allan eases readers into the story, with 60 pages of build-up as Val and Fry first meet Hertford, and the three travel more than a couple of hours by limousine to the chateau.  They are welcomed and introduced to their hosts, Henri-Robert Verlaine and his wife, Claudine.  At the lavish wine-tasting being held down in the wine cellar, Val and Fry also meet the other guests for the weekend:  Michael Rochambeau, the vineyard's chef de caves; Edouard Cherbourg, the vineyard's advertising director; Nicole Courteline, who is Edouard's secretary; Roger Saint-Benoit, head of sales for the vineyard; and Alexandre Saulnier-Carpeaux, descendant of the original owner of the chateau.  Of course, there is also Gerard (the butler), Caroline (the maid), and Alain (the cook).  With the cast fully introduced, Allan wastes no time at that point getting to the murder we've all been waiting to happen.

 

Rochambeau is the first to be killed, before the wine tasting can even get off to a good start.  With everyone there in the room, it's next to impossible to figure out who the killer is.  Then Cherbourg's secretary is killed rather gruesomely, with a mess left behind (hint: this is the scene from the cover of the book).  After that, Saint-Benoit literally has his brains beaten out of his skull, making him victim number three.  Before the night is even over, Hertford is nearly killed, saved only by the fortunate turn of his head at the most opportune moment!  One of the survivors of the group disappears, leaving everyone else to wonder if perhaps this points to the guilt of that person - but that suspicion comes into question when two more dead bodies turn up, bashed in their heads by a heavy tree branch (with a rather horrific image of those bodies depicted in one of the internal illustrations, page 171!).  With everyone being picked off so quickly, over the span of one evening, it leaves Val and Fry wondering - who's next?  (Hence, the book title!  In fact, the author asks this question three times in the story:  pages 82, 108, and 143.)

 

I was actually rather surprised by the rather explicit descriptions of the bloody deaths.  "Roger Saint-Benoit's skull had been cracked open ... The sight of his brains splattered among the bedclothes was sickening..." (p. 103).  The last two victims "had been bludgeoned to death ... and now lay in a shallow pool of blood that trickled directly across the narrow trail" (p. 165).  This is a murder mystery, so I would certainly expect some description of the crime scene; but I believe this is the most horrific descriptions I have seen to date in any book in this series.  And the illustration on page 171, with those last two victims - definitely not for the faint of heart!

 

Speaking of illustrations,  Sanford Hoffman once again provides the internal illustrations, and interestingly enough, three of the six internals are horizontal, rather than vertical.  Normally, we might see one or two in this way, but to see half of them depicted in this form is a bit unusual.  What is not unusual is the framing around the illustrations, since that seems to be a standard for Hoffman in this series, which, to be honest, I rather like.  Especially when he has part of the illustration extend beyond that frame (as he does with that gruesome scene on page 171).  The clues in the illustrations are not obvious at all, except maybe for the one on page 151, which becomes extremely clear once you know the identity of the killer.

 

There was a part of me, as I was reading the story, that was hoping this would all turn out to be some elaborate hoax, such as the film April Fool's Day (1986), and in the end, it would turn out no one was dead, but it was all staged just to test the analytical and detecting skills of the guests.  But, alas, it was not.  Instead,we got a replay of Agatha Christie's And Then There Were None, in which ten individuals at a secluded estate suddenly find themselves being picked off one by one (with the only obvious difference being not everyone dies in this tale!).

 

There are a few things worth pointing out about this book.  Published in October 1979, I was surprised to see a reference to Star Wars (p. 14).  Yes, the movie had been out for two years at this point, but normally I would not expect a pop cultural reference like this to appear so soon.  The author also throws in a number of real newspaper columnists, such as Dorothy Kilgallen and Louis Sobel from the New York Journal-American; Frank Farrell from the World Telegram; Earl Wilson and Leonard Lyons from the New York Post; and Walter Winchell from the New York Daily Mirror (p. 44).  These came up as Val revealed her original dream of becoming a columnist, before changing direction and working in advertising.

 

9 shattered bottles of champagne out of 10 for piling up the bodies, subtly laying out the clues, and providing readers with a creative climax to the story! 

The Evils of Peyton Place - the fifth Peyton Place novel by Roger Fuller

As I've been watching more and more episodes from the Peyton Place television show (the first couple of years, in the mid-60s), it reminded me that I still had more Peyton Place novels by Roger Fuller to read.  The books definitely follow the story as originally penned by Grace Metalious, and are not at all related to the television show, which deviated so far from the books - changing so many elements of Metalious' original, scandalous tale.  Fuller, on the other hand, not only builds on the original scandals in Metalious two-book story, but he goes well beyond what was considered morally and ethically acceptable back in those days!  This particular book, published in January 1969, contains probably some of the most "shocking" content of any of the prior four books in this series!

 

The Evils of Peyton Place introduces readers to yet more newcomers to the small New England community.   Willie Higginbotham is a filthy rich man who has never really had to work a day in his life.  He married Anne Higginbotham, known as "Higgie," who is anything but a usual housewife.  In fact, when it comes to being filthy rich, Higgie enjoys the filthy part more than the rich part.  Rarely sober, dependent on drugs prescribed by her questionable doctor, and in total reliance on her husband's support - physical, emotional, and psychological - Higgie is always looking for something new to satiate her depraved desires.  Never in a million years did Willie think all those kinks would find kindred spirits in a small community like Peyton Place ... but little did he know!

 

Fuller doesn't hold back any punches with this story, as he delves into the sexual escapades of Higgie and her way-too-permissive husband, Willie.  Thankfully, he does not involve any of the mainstay characters in Peyton Place (such as Mike Rossi, Michael Swain, Constance MacKenzie-Rossi, or even the gruff Sheriff Buck McCracken), and while Leslie Harrington is mentioned (as is his deceased son, Rodney), he is never actually seen in the story.  Rather, Fuller introduces other members of the small town who participate in Higgie's "Charades and Anagram Circle" (which is the cover-name for the orgies held at the Higginbotham home).  In fact, the book actually goes into a bit of detail about each of the town's families that secretly participate in these clandestine gatherings, expanding the known residents in Peyton Place.

 

What I think pushes the boundaries a bit too far with the story is when Fuller not only has Higgie engaging in sexual acts with their housekeeper's daughter (who is barely old enough to be out of high school!), but she also makes overtures towards the daughter of her husband's business partner - a girl that IS still in high school!  Thankfully, nothing every actually happens - it is merely threats made by Higgie; but Willie does finally put an end to the shenanigans and the marriage when he catches her in bed with his business partner's wife - a decision that has devastating consequences for not only Higgie, but for Willie as well.  This book has an extremely sad ending, moreso than any book that has come before in this series.  Of course, that does ground it somewhat in reality, as actions do have consequences, and the moral of this story definitely plays out - engaging in reckless, careless behavior, living a life of lies and secrets, will eventually catch up to you!

 

One thing I did like about this book - when characters or situations from previous books are mentioned, there is a footnote on that particular page that provides the reader with the title of the book wherein that particular character appeared or story took place (p. 21 references The Pleasure of Peyton Place and p. 125 references Again Peyton Place).  That's a nice way to refresh the memories of those who have read all the books, and a great reference for those who pick up and read this book before any of the others.

 

Of all the books, I would say this is probably the one I liked the least.  It is a bit difficult to get through because of the subject matter and because of the constant switch in point of view to the various characters introduced.  I still have several more books in the series to read, so we will see how they play out...

 

RATING:  6 scantily-clad fire-dancers out of 10 for pulling back the curtains on the sordid lives of the rich and bored behind closed doors in a small-town USA. 

Ghost of Dark Harbor - the first Dark Harbor Gothic Novel

"Visions of a terrifying phantom sent her to an institution.  Cured, she returns ... only to be tormented again!"  (cover blurb)

 

Having finished the Lucifer Cove series by Virginia Coffman, I decided to try a Gothic series by one of my favorite authors, W.E.D. Ross - this time, writing under his pseudonym Clarissa Ross.  The Dark Harbor series consists of six books, published between 1974 and 1975.  The books are set on "Pirate Island," a fictional island said to be set 30 miles south of Cape Cod (p. 12).  Ross goes on to describe the dimensions of said island as "fourteen miles long and three miles wide at its widest point" (p. 12).  The specific distance from Cape Cod, and the specific dimensions for the size of the island clearly indicate Ross was using Nantucket for his "Pirate Island," as Nantucket is literally 30 miles south of Cape Cod, and it is 14 miles long and approximately 3.5 miles wide.  An online search reveals that Ross's other series, Fog Island, also appears to be based on the island of Nantucket, leaving one to wonder if Ross regularly visited the often fog-shrouded island and found it the perfect setting for his stories.

 

Ghost of Dark Harbor is the first book in the series, and introduces readers to the island community, which was said to have been named Dark Harbor because its original settlers had left the mainland under the suspicion of being in league with the devil (p. 13).  The reader is brought to the island along with the main character for this story, Joyce Mills.  Poor Joyce has just been released from a mental hospital, where she was being treated after a complete breakdown following the death of her young daughter, Lucie.  The doctor has proclaimed she is sufficiently of sound mind to return home, but Joyce is not so sure.  Even her husband, Derek Mills, seems to be unsure, with his attitude towards her somewhat distant.  Without a doubt, her mother-in-law (Regina Mills) and sister-in-law (David's adopted sister, Mona) believe she is still mad, and they make it clear they do not want her back on the island, with their constant quips and smart remarks regarding her mental state.  The only understanding she receives is from the young David Chase, a painter who is staying at Mills Castle while he uses his talent to paint some ships for the Dark Harbor Museum (where Derek works).  While the household staff are nice enough, Joyce can see it in their eyes and in the quiver of their voice that they are wondering about her mental state.

 

Of course, it doesn't help that when she first arrives home, the black cat, Timmy, appears out of nowhere, startling her so that she screams in terror - after all, Lucie had been chasing after Timmy when she fell to her death from atop the high cliff behind the great house.  Then the ghostly apparitions start to appear.  Joyce is sure that she sees the ghost of Captain Peter Mills, that sea-faring man who build the castle for his new wife, then killed her and her lover when he returns home to find him in bed together, after which he took his own life by hanging himself in the basement.  No one believes her, but Joyce knows what she saw.  Only David Chase listens to her without judgment, as he admits that he was once in a mental hospital following a horrific car accident in which a friend of his was killed.   Ross slowly builds the suspense in the story, as Joyce's visions become more frequent, and it is not until she speaks with Zachary Miller, an elderly man who used to be a ship captain many years ago, that she begins to wonder if the apparitions are not ghosts at all, but a real person who is purposefully trying to scare her away.

 

Is it her own husband doing this?  After all, she did find an old captain's uniform hidden in the chapel near Mills Castle, and he was upset that she had discovered it.  Could he be trying to get rid of her so he would be with Faith Patterson, the woman with whom everyone says he is having an affair?  Or is it Regina and Mona, working together to remove a woman they do not see mentally fit to be a member of their prestigious family?  With her gone, Mona would have a chance with her adopted brother (since they are not blood related).  Or, as much she hates to think it, could it be Uncle Henry Mills, her husband's uncle who lives with them at the castle, and who spends most days drinking more alcohol than he should while living off of his relatives' money.  He seems to be in the right place at the right time whenever Joyce has a scare.  Could he have some secret reason for wanting her gone?  And what about David Chase?  She really knows nothing about him, and although he has declared his love for her and wants nothing more than to rescue here from the taunts and terrors of the Mills family, could he be trying to scare her so that he can have her all to himself?

 

Ross certainly provides the readers with plenty of suspects, plenty of motives, and plenty of questions as to whether Joyce is really seeing anything at all, or if it is all in her imagination.  Regina and Mona are downright nasty, and I kept waiting for Joyce to stand up for herself against them (the few times she does, I nearly cheered!).  Even Derek, her own husband, comes across as cold and pretty much heartless, constantly berating her for expressing what she sees, threatening to send her back to the mental hospital if she does not stop.  I found Joyce to be an extremely weak-willed character, and maybe Ross intended her to be that way; but all the while I was reading, I kept waiting for Joyce to grow a backbone and finally stand up to all these people.  She had the support of David Chase, Uncle Henry, and even Captain Miller, who listened to all of her problems every time she visited him and offered her sound advice.  Sadly, although she has a few moments of strength, Joyce remains the helpless victim through most of the story, even reaching the point where she begins to question her own sanity and believe maybe she does need to go back to the hospital. 

 

In true W.E.D. Ross style, the big reveal and climactic revelations and battle all occur within just the last few pages of the story, with no huge fanfare at all.  After spending nearly 175 pages building up the suspense to the point where you think you are going to burst if the story doesn't break, Ross gives readers a quick reveal of the culprit behind everything, with a paragraph, maybe two, that explains why the person did what they did.  Then, it's all over, Joyce is safe, and it turns out she is not crazy after all.  Sadly, Ross does not give the reader any satisfaction when it comes to seeing the people who treated Joyce so poorly eat crow for thinking she was making up everything she saw.  I would have liked to have seen some sort of recompense, but instead, we simply get a closing scene of Joyce realizing that the horrors are all behind her, and everything "is going to be different!" (p. 190).  But, Ross is pretty much consistent in his writing, as every story I've read of his ends in this same manner.

 

One thing Ross does do in the story is give readers a quick look at some of the members of the community in Dark Harbor, which makes me wonder how many of these inhabitants will become the focus of future books in the series.  We get brief glimpses and information about Matthew Kimble, who came home after being in prison to run the local inn and tavern (p. 19).  There is also the unnamed New York playboy who purchased the old monastery up on the hill, which used to be a place where monks cared for lepers and is now rumored to be a secret house of debauchery and partying (p. 20).  Captain Zachary Miller, on the other hands, names off a list of the island's more colorful characters:  Crevecoeur, the French nobleman; Ruben Chase and Long Tom Coffin, who cared for nothing but the sea; Ratliff, the British bluejacket; Billy Clark, he town crier; Mary Starbuck, the queen among women; her ruthless maid, Keziah Coffin; and the rather rotund Deborah Chase, who literally threw suitors up on rooftops!  There was also Maria Mitchell, the astronomer, and Lucretia Mott, the crusader (p. 124).  It leads me to wonder how many of these "legends" will appear and play a role in the remaining five books.

 

The cover art is provided by the Italian artist extraordinaire, Lou Marchetti, who was quite well known for his cover art for paperback novels and more than a few Gothic novels.  The cover scene, however, is quite deceptive.  At first glance, once would think this was a period piece, as the clothing and hairstyle, and quite frankly, the whole scene, appears to be something of the 18th or19th century.  Yet, the story takes place in modern times (well, modern at the time it was written).  The woman in red is meant to be Joyce Mills, and the dress is one that she is given by her sister-in-law to wear from a grand ball; but the dress is ripped to shreds before she ever has a chance to wear it.  Thus (as with so many Gothic paperback covers), the scene never actually appears anywhere in the story.

 

Overall, I'd say this was a fairly decent start to this series, and I look forward to seeing what's up next in Dark Harbor!

 

RATING:  8 slashed up crimson gowns out of 10 for a ghostly story of mental madness, sinister spirits, and terrifying torments that create a true Gothic tale of suspense and mystery!