Nancy Drew Mystery Stories # 143 - Mystery on Maui

 "Surf's up - and so is the crime on Nancy's Hawaiian holiday!" (cover blurb)

 

"Nancy rides a wave of danger in pursuit of a surfing saboteur!" (back cover blurb)

 

Published in June 1998, it turns out this particular Nancy Drew mystery was written by the same author as the last book - Elizabeth Nugent (or so it says on Wikipedia, so take it for what it's worth).  While I can find no real information regarding this particular author online, it does not surprise me that the same person wrote books 142 and 143.  Both books have more of a Nancy Drew Files feel to them, rather than the standard digest stories.  Both books have considerably more high-stakes danger, and the mysteries themselves are definitely more adult themed - with villains who will not hesitate to kill in order to keep their activities from being brought to light!  Since the Files series ended in 1997, it makes sense that there were some left over stories, perhaps even some completed manuscripts, that simply got repurposed for the digest series in order to meet deadlines.

 

Mystery on Maui takes Nancy, Bess, and George to Maui, the second largest of Hawaii's islands, for a vacation (and we all know how vacations always turn out for Nancy!).  They were invited by an old friend of Nancy's, Danny Takemura, "who had spent his junior year of high school in River Heights" (p. 3).  The author indicates Nancy and Danny had become good friends and stayed in touch as "E-mail pen pals" (p. 3).  This poses an interesting question - if Nancy and Danny have stayed in touch via e-mail since they completed their junior year (and if Nancy is eighteen, as stated in the previous book, which means they just finished their senior years), then they would have been in communication via e-mail for a little over a year.  So, in all the time that Nancy has been solving mysteries (142 of them in just the span of a year!), why was this "good friend" of Nancy's never mentioned before?  Of course, this series boasts countless "good friends," for whom Nancy solves mysteries, and who we never see or even hear mention of ever again - so how good of friends could they really be?  But, I digress...

 

Now, about the mystery itself. It involves the Golf Coast Surf-Off, in which one of Danny's friends, Josh Brightman, is a contender (p. 5).  Nancy indicates "Golf Coast" is what the western part of Maui is called, and Josh tells them it is also the name of a big chain of stores in Hawaii and California; however, neither of those things are true.  (While the book does contain fictional locations, the city of Lahaina, used in the book [p. 17], is an actual city, located on the northwest coast of the island of Maui; however the reference to the run-down harbor town of Point Guerre [p. 116] is purely fictional.)  Nevertheless, Josh is predicted to be the big winner of the contest, with the chance to win $75,000!  When Josh explains that his two top competitors have both had to back out - one due to food poisoning, and the other due to a fall that injured his leg - Nancy starts to wonder if someone is eliminating the competition in the hopes of winning themselves.  Josh scoffs at the idea until his surfboard is stolen ... and then he receives a note warning him to drop out or else ... and then he finds a deadly snake in his gym bag ... and ultimately he is kidnapped before he can finish the tournament!  With a huge and potentially deadly storm ready to strike Maui, Nancy realizes she must race against time to find her new friend before someone decides to eliminate him from the contest - permanently!

 

Nugent (a/k/a Carolyn Keene) provides the readers with several likely suspects.  First is a fellow competitor, Hank Carter, who is cocky and determined to win at all costs, even if he has to use underhanded tactics to do so.  Second is Manny Monolo, a lifeguard who has an ax to grind with Josh after a fight they had that cost Manny his chance to become a paramedic.  Third is the stranger who tries to steal Josh's surfboard, a man they refer to as "the Snake" because of a tattoo he has of a snake going around his arm.  Fourth is Ruby Blackwell, a former surfer who has opened a surf shop on the beach and is trying to market a new surfboard - and who also happens to be a former girlfriend of Hank Carter.  Last, but not least, is the unsavory Russell Frye, a boat captain who takes tourists out for shark watching, illegally dumping chum into the water to attract sharks.  It seems Josh had reported him to the police, and Frye is none-too-happy with him, vowing to get revenge one way or another.  Thus, with all these suspects, Nancy must find out every thing she can about each of them in order to narrow down her list to the real culprit.

 

As with the last book, the danger levels and violence in this book definitely give it the feel of a Files rather than a standard digest Mystery Story.  For instance, near the start of the story, George is out surfing and gets pulled out by the riptide and knocked unconscious in the water.  By the time they get her to shore, she is not breathing and it appears touch-and-go for a moment before a lifeguard is able to revive her (p. 35).  Later in the story, when Josh finds the snake in his gym bag, it turns out to be a death adder (p. 87), a very venomous snake that originates from Australia (as accurately referenced in the book).  Near the end of the book, when Nancy is tracking down the Snake, she finds him facedown on the floor, with a knife next to him and "a tiny trail of blood" (p. 118).  Finally, near the climax of the mystery, when the real villain has Nancy and her friends trapped, the villain splashes kerosene all over Nancy's clothes and holds a plastic lighter with the threat of burning her alive (pp. 134-35)!  These type of scenes are definitely not the kind one would normally find in a standard Nancy Drew Mystery Story.

 

The cover art, yet again, is provided by Ernie Norcia.  The scene appears to be taken from the moment near the beginning when George is knocked out while surfing, with Nancy running to her aid.  The scene does not really have any connection to the mystery, other than to provide a way for the author to introduce the lifeguard, Manny Monolo.  It truly amazes me how life-life Norcia is able to paint Nancy and her friends.  The art almost appears as if it were a photograph taken at a real beach, with those waves crashing down on the sand. Simon & Schuster definitely picked the perfect artist for these covers - it is a shame they eventually moved on to a different artist.

 

RATING:  9 squadrons of shadowy sea creatures with dorsal fins out of 10 for a fast-paced mystery filled with ever-increasing danger and deadly villains! 

Nancy Drew Mystery Stories # 142 - The Case of Capital Intrigue

"Nancy's in Washington, D.C., and she's uncovered a monumental mystery!" (cover blurb)

 

"Nancy investigates a shocker of a crime - at 1600 Pennsylvania Avenue!" (back cover blurb)

 

Published in April 1998, this Nancy Drew digest is unique - in some ways, it follows the books that have come before; yet, in other ways, it digresses greatly from the typical Nancy Drew Mystery Stories formula.  According to Wikipedia (and yes, I do realize, you can't take everything there as the gospel truth), this particular book was ghostwritten by Elizabeth Nugent.  I am not familiar with this name, and I only find two authors by this name:  Liz Nugent, a bestselling author who also worked in film, theatre, and television and who currently lives in Dublin; and Elizabeth R. Nugent, an assistant professor of politics at Princeton University, whose research and writing focuses on the politics of authoritarianism and religion in the Middle East.  Quite honestly, neither of these seem to fit the bill, with the latter being (I believe) too young to have been writing books back in 1998.  It is coincidental, however, that the latter Ms. Nugent teaches politics, and that's exactly what this mystery is all about!

 

The Case of Capital Intrigue takes Nancy Drew to Washington, D.C., where she is visiting her best friend, George Fayne, who has an internship as a photographer's assistant at the White House. Now, those who have read the past couple of books are probably asking yourself - didn't George and Nancy just have an internship at a television station in the last book?  And were they not volunteering (interning) for a non-profit organization that helps teenagers in the one before that?  What was going on at Simon & Schuster around this time, that all of Nancy's mysteries seemed to center around some form of internship to get the mystery off the ground?  And let's be completely honest here - how in the world would an eighteen year-old girl with absolutely no photography experience get selected to be an intern at the White House, of all places?  And how in the world would she be allowed to invite her best friend, who is also just eighteen years of age, to come visit her on the job?  Talk about some major suspension of disbelief!  Even in 1998, I do not believe the White House and jobs associated therewith were that easy to get.

 

Aside from that, Nancy gets involved with some political intrigue, as a precious gift that was being presented by the President of the fictional South American country of San Valente goes missing, right under Nancy's nose (quite literally, as she is looking at the gold hummingbird statue when someone konks her on the head, knocking her unconscious, so they can steal the statue (p. 24)).  If news of this theft gets out, then it could not only destroy the treaty being signed between the countries, but it could look very bad for the current administration (and, this being 1998, that would have been Bill Clinton's administration).  Thus, Nancy sets about trying to find the thief, while trying to navigate all of the game-playing that goes on in Washington - and, oh, yes, there is plenty of that.  It seems everyone is out to get everyone else's job, and that includes poor George.  I mean, seriously, who would really be so interested in getting an assistant photographer job that they would send threatening notes and even poison George's food?  Well, that someone is definitely there, and unfortunately, those incidents become red herrings in Nancy's search for the hummingbird thief.

 

Now, if George getting the internship and Nancy being allowed access to the White House weren't enough unbelievable events, then I won't even bring up the moment where Nancy sneaks into the office of a secret service agent, figures out what the password to his computer is, peek at some highly classified files, and then talk her way out of the whole thing when the agent's secretary returns before Nancy can get out of the office (pp. 58-65)!  I realize this is fiction, and the story is not intended for adults, but seriously?  I think even pre-teens would be intelligent and savvy enough to know there is no way an eighteen year-old girl would be able to get away with that.  And let's not discuss how the White House security not only believe her in the climactic moments of the story, when Nancy figures out who the thief is and goes about to set a trap for him in the White House, but they allow Nancy to plan out the details and direct them in what they need to do!  Even my ability to suspend my disbelief was pushed to the limits with that one.

 

All of that being said, the story was not really bad at all (when you overlook those unbelievable scenes).  The danger is extremely high, as not only do George and Nancy nearly get run off of the third story of a parking garage, but Nancy actually gets shot at not once, but twice, over the course of the story!  I was rather surprised, as I recall one of the Stratemeyers' big rules was that there was never any guns in play.  Of course, this was years after Simon & Schuster took over the properties, so those rules were likely thrown out the window some time prior; however, that level of threat, along with the political intrigue, made this feel more like a Nancy Drew Files mystery than a regular Nancy Drew Mystery Stories tale.  In fact, since the Nancy Drew Files came to an end in 1997, one has to wonder if this was perhaps a left-over story that got repurposed from the Files to the Mystery Stories series.  This might also explain why Nancy has an admirer in the story that she not only encourages, but she allows him to kiss her - twice!  What in the world would Ned think of that?

 

A few fun facts come out of this book - first, Chicago is firmly established as "the neareset big city to her hometown of River Heights" (p. 2).  I don't recall any of the digests so blatantly making such a statement, but if I recall correctly, a friend has told me the Files make reference to Chicago more often than not (which would support my believe this manuscript was originally intended as a Files story).  Second, George is said to be "five foot eight," while Nancy is "five foot seven," both eighteen years old (p. 31).  We knew the age, but I cannot recall if these heights were ever stated so definitely before.  Third, ipecac, which is used to poison George, is an actual mediation that is used to induce vomiting and could potentially cause dangerous complications, as described in the book (p. 77).

 

The cover art is one again by the super-talented Ernie Norcia, who manages to create a somewhat dramatic scene with Nancy and Eduardo (the son of the San Valente ambassador, who, by the way, gets kidnapped towards the end, with his life threatened if Eduardo does not makes sure the treaty never gets signed!).  I had always thought the man in the cover art was Ned, but nope - it's Eduardo, as he and Nancy make a run for it in the rain when a sniper tries to shoot them while they are visiting the Lincoln Memorial (p. 107).  And, surprisingly, Norcia very nearly got the clothes the two of them are wearing, based on how they are described n the story.

 

Setting aside the hard-to-believe elements of the story, the book was actually a pretty solid read, with good pacing and a well-plotted mystery.  I would mark this as one of the better of the Nancy Drew digests.

 

RATING:  8 regular turkey and Swiss cheese sandwiches out of 10 for upping the ante a bit for Nancy Drew, giving her a more mature and far more dangerous mystery to solve than she is used to (in this series, at least!) 

Nancy Drew Mystery Stories # 141 - The Wild Cat Crime

"Nancy faces a dangerous threat when danger is uncaged!'  (cover blurb)

 

"A hunt for missing cougar cubs leads Nancy into a sinister trap!" (back cover blurb)

 

It is interesting that Simon & Schuster would publish two Nancy Drew books back-to-back where Nancy and her best friends, Bess and George, are holding down jobs of sorts.  Since the series inception back in 1930, Nancy and/or her friends having an actual job, or even an internship, has been seen only on rare occasions; here were are, though, at the beginning of 1998, and Nancy and her friends can be found working - volunteering for an after-school program in the previous book (140 - The Door-to-Door Deception), and now interning at a local television station (Nancy and George) and at a zoo (Bess) for this book.  Although both volunteering and interning are jobs that normally come without any salary (it's not like Nancy needs money!), it is rather unique to find the girls doing something other than simply solving mysteries in their leisure time.

 

The Wild Cat Crime, published in February 1998, lets readers know from the very first page of the story that Nancy and George are interning at Channel 9 news (p. 1).  I believe this is the first reference we have ever seen of an actual television station, and it is further identified as "WRVH-TV" on the next page (p. 2).  The mystery, however, has little to do with their work at the television station; instead, the mystery comes from Bess's own summer internship at the River Heights Zoo - an endangered cougar successfully gave birth to four baby cubs, and shortly after one cub is thought to be missing (but is thankfully found having somehow gotten beyond the door into the habitat area), all four cubs disappear!  When Bess's boss, Sally, finds out Nancy is a detective, she asks her to look into the matter and find the cubs quickly, as they were still newborns who needed to be fed on a strict schedule or they could be irreparably harmed!  Needless, to say, Nancy is on the case.

 

What gives this story a bit of a twist - or should I say WHO gives this story a bit of a twist - is the investigative news reporter for whom Nancy and George work, one Christy Kelley.  Christy is not the easiest woman to work for, and Nancy and George have spent most of their internship doing menial jobs, barely saying one word to the girls since they started.  When Nancy shares the news of the cubs' birth with Christy, thinking it might make a good story, Christy takes it out of Nancy's hands, deciding it is best to do it with just her camera and sound men.  George believes Christy is jealous of Nancy, as she was hired because of her fame as a detective.  "Christy seems pretty ambitious," George tells her.  "She might be worried you do a better job investigating stories" (p. 4).  Thus, from the get-go, the reader knows that Christy Kelley is going to be a foil during the investigation.  One might say she is the "Brenda Carlton" character in the Nancy Drew Mystery Stories series (Brenda, for those who do not know, was a recurring character in the Nancy Drew Files series, which ended in 1997, and she was a reporter who was constantly causing problems for Nancy during her investigations).

 

The ghostwriter for this book definitely throw Nancy into one dangerous situation after another.  She and George face off against a deadly Cobra snake;  Nancy and Bess are on a monorail that derails right next to a hyena pen; Nancy is held by knife point by a store owner who mistakes her for the kidnapper; and Nancy is pushed into a cougar habitat with a deadly male cougar ready to attack!  Whoever stole the four cougar cubs is definitely not playing games!  There are suspects galore: Christy (who is said, more than one, bears a striking resemblance to Nancy) seems a little too determined to find those missing cubs before Nancy; Hawk, the cameraman, goes a little overboard in his defense against locking up animals in cages; Joey, the sound man, is evasive and acts very suspicious every time Nancy questions him about the day of the kidnapping; Eduardo Vallejo, the cat trainer who knows more about the cougars than anyone; Randy Thompson, the assistant vet, whose position gives him easy access to the cougars at any time (and he would know how to sedate the mother to nab the cubs!); and even Sally Nelson, the main zoo vet and the woman for whom Bess works.  While Sally seems to be the most unlikely suspect, we all know that in a good mystery, anyone can be the culprit!

 

While the story is very fast paced, due to the limited page count (149 pages with the not-so-small font), the mystery actually develops nicely, and the clues are somewhat subtle, so as not to be glaringly obvious to the reader.  It make for a pretty good read.  One of the things that did annoy me was the number of times George and Bess referred to Nancy as either "Drew" or "Nan."  I realize by the time this book was published in the late '90s, using nicknames, such as a last name or a shortened version of a first name, was a long-established thing, the Nancy Drew series has always, for the most part, given Nancy Drew a level of respect by having everyone refer to her by her proper name.  Calling her by a nickname may modernize the story somewhat, but I think it also takes away from the strength that her name gives the character.  I mean, even the director of the zoo, when he meets her, asks, ""Are you, by any chance, the Nancy Drew - the detective?" (p. 46).  This is a prime example of where the name really matters!

 

(On a side note, the author does manage to throw in a Sherlock Holmes reference, when Nancy first notices the monorail track, which lead "to a quaint, old-fashioned-looking train platform and station.  It looks like a station where Sherlock Homes might catch a train, Nancy thought" [p. 8].  Nice to see one great detective make mention of another!)

 

The gorgeous cover art is provided by Ernie Norcia, who, as fans of the digests know, provided the art for a large majority of these half-white covers.  The scene captures the climatic moment near the end of the mystery, when Nancy is pushed into the cougar habitat and must find a way to escape before a deadly male cougar makes a meal out of her!  Not so sure the outfit Nancy is wearing matches the clothing she had on in the story, but that black dress does work perfectly with the dark, night scene pained by Norcia, and her expression captures her realization of just how much danger she is in!

 

I would go so far to say that this is one of the better digests, as it provides a well-plotted mystery with characters who are not just cookie-cutter stereotypes.  I'd recommend this one.

 

RATING:  9 missing B-rolls of film out of 10 for a really wild mystery set in one of the most unlikely of places (let's face it - how many crimes really happen in a zoo?) - and Nancy had to match wits with a criminal who seemed to always be one step ahead of her! 

Nancy Drew Mystery Stories # 140 - The Door-to-Door Deception

 "Nancy's on a crash course with crime!"  (cover blurb)

 

"A very good cause puts Nancy in the middle of some very bad business!" (back cover blurb)

 

It's been quite a while since I've read any of the Nancy Drew digests (those paperback books published by Simon & Schuster as a continuation of the Nancy Drew Mystery Stories started by Grosset & Dunlap back in 1930).  Over the years, I have heard many fans of Nancy Drew make disparaging remarks about the digests, claiming they lack the quality of the original series, and that the stories are nowhere near as good as "the first 56 books" (which certain die-hard fans claims are the only true Nancy Drew canon).  However, having read (thus far) books 57 through 139 (and now, with this one, 140), I can say that a number of these digests have some very well-written mysteries, some of which I would consider superior to the last five or six mysteries published by Grosset & Dunlap. However, as the series progressed, the stories did start to become more hit or miss, with some not quite hitting the mark.  This, I would have to say, is one of those.

 

The Door-to-Door Deception is not your typical Nancy Drew fare.  This is more of a story about embezzlement and burglaries.  Nancy and Bess agree to join George, who has been volunteering with a local after-school program for junior high students (called "CARING"), unaware of the trouble they will soon find themselves facing.  It seems not only does CARING have another organization, known as "YES," that is competing with them for funding from the community, but one of the counselors and one of the teenagers are not too fond of Nancy and her friends.  When some incidents take place - such as hot sauce being put into Bess's water bottle and the brake on Nancy's inline skate being tampered with - Nancy suspects that the counselor and student may be pulling such stunts to get them to stop volunteering.  When George is accused of stealing some of the organization's funds, Nancy realizes things are much more serious than she realized.

 

Meanwhile, after Nancy is stopped by the police while trying to sell energy bars to raise money for CARING, she learns from her father that there as been a string of burglaries in River Heights, all during broad daylight.  Every home had belonged to wealthy families, and somehow the alarm systems had been bypassed by the thieves.  Of course, Nancy begins to suspect that her two cases might be connected (and let's face it - when has Nancy ever had two cases in the same book that were not connected?), and soon enough all of the clues lead her to the same place.  And while one suspect is clearly involved, I will say the ghostwriter for this book gives readers a bit of surprise with the other culprit - quite frankly, it was the last person I would have suspected being involved in the whole scheme!

 

This is another one of those books that seems to place River Heights in or around Chicago, Illinois.  The CARING center is said to be located "on the South Side, across the street from Washington Park" (p. 4).  In the real world, there is a Washington Park, which is a historic neighborhood and park located on the South Side of Chicago.  Later in the book, Nancy is selling energy bars on Markham Lane (p. 26) - while there is no Markham "Lane" in Chicago that I could find, there is a Markham "Avenue."  Thus, one can assume that either the ghostwriter is from or familiar with Chicago, or specifically chose identifying places from that area to keep River Heights central to the part of Illinois.

 

Food-wise in this book, Hannah is said to have prepared a dessert she calls "raspberry fool" (p. 87), which, as it turns out, is a real thing.  A little searching online reveals it is a traditional English dessert that is easy to make - you simply stir the berries, sugar, and liqueur together and let it sit for 15 minutes; whip up some cream with powdered sugar until soft peaks form; mash the berry mixture until the liquid and fruit are mashed together; spoon half the fruit into the cream, fold once or twice with a rubber spatula, add the remaining half of the fruit, and fold again - serve in glasses with crumbled cookies on top!  (Recipe taken from:  Pioneer Woman - Raspberry Fool).  Sounds mighty tasty, I might have to try this myself!

 

Something else I learned in this book is all about the game of "newcomb," a sport which the author spends pretty much an entire chapter going over how the kids played it (pp. 45-50).  Newcomb ball is similar to volleyball, in that two teams are on either side of a net and hit the ball over the net to each other - the major difference being, in newcomb, you catch the ball and throw it back - you don't hit it back.  I had never heard of this before, and perhaps that is because newcomb is not widely played today (although it appears to still be somewhat popular in some northern New England states.

 

The cover art for this book was provided by Ernie Norcia (who provided art for 21 of the 31 covers during this particular era of Nancy Drew).  The scene is drawn from the moment where Nancy discovers, to her chagrin, that someone has tampered with her skates, and the brake part has come loose, causing her to be unable to stop herself as she speeds downhill toward a riverbank (p. 99).  For me, this cover has always appeared awkward, not really providing the reader with any idea of what the mystery is about - I mean, let's be serious for a moment: Nancy stumbling while on skates does not truly scream "embezzlement" or "burglary" at all.  The only reason I can come up with as to why the publisher chose this scene for the cover is that the book does not really have any cliffhanger moments or spooky scenes; rather, this is one of those cerebral mysteries that depends more on Nancy's analytical side than any actual physical detecting (although there is a moment where someone grabs Nancy around the neck from behind and holds her in a headlock - p. 117 - but that might have been too much for a Nancy Drew cover).

 

This was not an overly exciting mystery, was not fast-paced at all, and the introduction of little Dino (a young boy who persistently wants to help Nancy solve the mystery) is rather annoying - he sort of reminds of Midge Watson, the little detective wannabe who attaches herself to Nancy in book 73, Enemy Match.  The character is not an integral part of the mystery, but rather, is used for nothing else other than to feed Nancy clues that she could have otherwise discovered through her normal detective work.  I applaud S&S and the ghostwriter for attempting to give readers a different type of mystery (hey, it's not sabotage!), but I feel like this one simply did not read like a normal Nancy Drew mystery - no suspense, no real danger, no truly dastardly villains.  But, here we are at book 140, so I supposed with this many mysteries in the series, they can't all be winners!

 

RATING:  6 shopping bags filled with dozens of CDs out of 10 for at least trying something different and introducing readers to a tasty new dessert to try! 

Will the Real Carolyn Keene Please Stand Up - the Lives of the Creators of Nancy Drew

When I stumbled across this on Amazon.com, I was not sure if I really wanted to buy it.  After all, there are already a number of books out there about the "creators" of Nancy Drew - ones that focus on the Stratemeyer Syndicate itself, others that focus on Mildred Wirt Benson, and some that focus on the evolution and impact of the character, Nancy Drew.  Did I really need another one?  And I had no knowledge of the author, Christine Keleny, other than the brief information provided on Amazon about her.  So, I debated back and forth, but I finally listened to that insistent voice in the back of my mind that kept saying, "if you want all things Nancy Drew related, then you must have this," and I bought it.  Took me a bit before I finally picked it up and read it, but now, I can honestly say, I am so thoroughly glad I bought it, because this book is not just another analytical study of the individuals who created and wrote Nancy Drew - no, this book is actually a well-written, well-researched prose biography of the three people who had the most influence in the character of Nancy Drew - Edward Stratemeyer, his daughter Harriet, and his young ghostwriter, Mildred Wirt!

 

Will The Real Carolyn Keene Please Stand Up gives fans a fresh new look at the history of Nancy Drew's creation. For a character that has been around for nearly 100 years, with new stories continuously published over the course of those nearly ten decades, Nancy Drew has had plenty of books look at her creators, her longevity, her enduring appeal, her pop icon status, and just about every other aspect you can think of as it relates to the girl detective.  Authors like Melanie Rehak, Michael G. Cornelius, Carolyn Carpan, Bobbie Ann Mason, LuElla D'Amico, Emily Hamilton-Honey, Geoffrey S. Lapin, and many others have offered so much insight over the years with books, essays, and countless hours of research on the subject of Nancy Drew and her creation; yet, surprisingly, in all of that time, not once has there ever been a historical look at those creators told in a prose, biographical fashion.  Until now.  Author Christine Keleny (Christine Keleny Books) is not only a writer, but she is also an editor, book designer, and publisher, whose works cross into historical fiction, mystery, adventure, and memoir.  This particular book, while offering well researched biographies on Stratemeyer, Adams, and Wirt-Benson, is also infused with a certain level of historical fiction - since a lot of the conversations and character-thoughts expressed throughout the book are not necessarily factual - but based on everything we knew about these three, they very well could be!

 

Keleny opens her book in the most obvious place - the now-infamous 1980 trial that resulted from the lawsuit filed by Grosset & Dunlap against the Stratemeyer Syndicate and Simon & Schuster over the rights to Nancy Drew, Hardy Boys, and the numerous other series G&D had been publishing for the Syndicate for more than half-a-century.  An aging Harriet Stratemeyer Adams is on the stand, being questioned regarding the creation of Nancy Drew and the books' original author, which sends Adams on a trip down memory lane ... a trip that the reader gets to follow as we turn back the pages of time to 1887, when a young Edward Stratemeyer is striving to become an author, feeling it in is veins, despite his father's and brother's attempts to dissuade him to pick a more steady career.  The book progresses at a fairly fast rate, as we jump ahead one, two, three, or even more years at a time, following Edward as he meets his wife ... as he begins selling his stories ... as he has two daughters ... as his books become so popular he creates a syndicate of writers to help him get his ideas into book form faster.  We read how the twentieth century saw a huge rise in the success of his children's series - The Rover Boys, The Bobbsey Twins, Tom Swift, Ruth Fielding, and many others, eventually leading to 1927 and the publication of The Hardy Boys.  This, as we all know, led to his creation of a companion series for girls, a girl detective that only one person could write - a young ghostwriter who had taken over the Ruth Fielding series for his Syndicate - Mildred Augustine Wirt.

 

Keleny alternates between the various players.  Some chapters focus on Edward, while others look at what Mildred was doing, while others take a look at Harriet and her sister, Edna.  Keleny's story is so well-written, that the reader can visually picture each of the characters as they act and speak on the page, and honestly, this would transition so beautifully into a movie, or even a television mini-series.  Edward, Harriet, and Mildred are all developed far beyond their typical "this is what research tells us about them" found in most books; instead, we get living, breathing characters with emotions, with hopes and dreams, with frustrations and losses, with times of happiness and times of mourning.  Yes, the scenes portrayed throughout the book come from the Stratemeyer Records on file with the New York Public Library ... from the Iowa Women's Archives at the University of Iowa ... from researchers such as Geoffrey S. Lapin (to whom the author credits having done considerable work to uncover Wirt's connection as the original author of the Nancy Drew books) and James Keeline ... and to the descendants of the Stratemeyer family itself ... however, they are expressed through a prose tale that draws the reader in until, just like the children's series that are the subject matter of these individuals, he or she cannot help but turn page after page after page to see what is going to happen next!

 

The one thing I think Keleny does perfectly with this book is acknowledge the fact that there was never just "one" Carolyn Keene.  Sure, Edward Stratemeyer created the idea and the initial outlines for the Nancy Drew series.  Sure, Mildred Wirt (Benson) wrote the original books in the series.  Sure, Harriet Stratemeyer Adams took over the character and molded her into the later image that so many adults today remember her as.  Yet, it was not just one of these three that "created" Nancy Drew; rather, it was the amalgamation of all three - Stratemeyer, Wirt, and Adams - that ultimately defined Nancy Drew and gave her the characteristics and charisma that has helped her endure for nearly 100 years non-stop.  While so many other series fell away, many long forgotten - Nancy Drew is still at the forefront, still recognized as the quintessential girl detective (let's face it - any book, any movie, any television show that features a female detective will always make at least one, if nor more, reference to Nancy Drew).  And this book is the perfect story of how these three individuals, in their own special ways, combined to make (literally!) the world's greatest amateur female detective.

 

Now, for all this praise (and I really did enjoy the book!), that's not to say it's perfect.  It is always a bit off-putting when I come across grammatical errors or misspellings in a published book - and this book had a number of them.  When talking about the gala thrown by Simon & Schuster after they took over publication of the Stratemeyer properties, it states, "[w]asn't Nancy's popularity proven at the gala 15th anniversary party put on by Simon & Schuster for Nancy Drew..." (p. 5).  This was actually referring to the 50th anniversary gala. Later, when we read about Edward acting out a story he is writing, his wife "knew that this roll-playing was important to Edward..." (p. 20).  I believe the author meant "role" playing.  These are only a couple - there are others that could be listed, but it is a reminder that books are no longer edited with precision as they used to be.  While these are small things, and they don't make the book any less readable, they do (for me, at least) present a jarring moment, at which I'm taken out of the story as my mind immediately focuses on the error.

 

As an aside, Keleny does throw in a moment of Hardy Boys history for us, as she gives us a few pages of Leslie McFarlane and his first communications with Stratemeyer (pp. 108 - 114), which ultimately led to his taking on the Hardy Boys books, and later, the first few Dana Girls stories.  There are also moments with members of the Garis family, as well as the addition of Andrew Svenson as a partner of the Syndicate.  Thus, the author gives readers a well-rounded story of everything that was going on in the lives of these three creators, and how it all impacted their work on, and in Harriet's case, her utter devotion to Nancy Drew.

 

Who was the real Carolyn Keene?  Well, once you read this book, I believe you will be in a much stronger position to answer that question, and you will be sparked to delve deeper and do your own research and studies to get a better understanding of everything (and everyone!) that went into creating our favorite teen detective!  Is every word of this book true, and did every thing that is described in this book actually take place the way it is written here?  Probably not.  But that does not in any way lessen this book's value in the annals of Nancy Drew studies, and it certainly should not detract from anyone's enjoyment in reading the story.  

 

RATING:  10 last ditch attempts to sell the Syndicate out of 10 for a well-researched, superbly written story of the lives, loves, hardships, and successes of the three individuals who, in one way or another, created Nancy Drew.

Nancy Drew Diaries, Not. 27 - Vans & Villains

The new year got started with a new book in the Nancy Drew Diaries series.  With volume 27, plus, the Christmas special some years back, the Nancy Drew series has surpassed the Hardy Boys Adventures series, which ended back in 2023 with its 25th book.  The fact that the name "Nancy Drew" has achieved a certain level of pop culture status (even people who have never read a Nancy Drew in their life seem to know it refers to a female detective whenever they hear the name used on a television show, in a movie, or in a book), and at this point, one has to wonder if that is the only thing keeping this series alive.  Despite the Hardy Boys having been published three years prior to Nancy Drew, their level of popularity has never really reached the same heights as Nancy Drew.  But that popularity is dwindling down.  The books have gone down to only one being published per year (which would be okay, if the page count were higher and the content stronger!), and the companion series for younger readers, the Nancy Drew Clue Books, seems to have ended in 2024 with the publication of its 19th title.  Perhaps Simon & Schuster is gearing up for some really big re-boots in 2027 (the Hardy Boys) and 2030 (Nancy Drew), which is why the various series have been allowed to end - one can only pray this is the case, since these series are both nearly 100 years old, and it would be a shame to see them both be laid to rest so close their centennial celebrations.  I suppose we can only wait and see...

 

Vans & Villains, while not an overly exciting "mystery" title, sadly falls back on the sabotage trope that has plagued this Diaries series, as well as its precursor, the Girl Detective series.  It feels like either the ghostwriters being selected to write the books, or perhaps the publisher itself, has little to no creativity left when it comes to creating plots for mystery stories.  No missing wills, no kidnapped heiresses, no stolen heirlooms, no haunted castles - literally, nothing other than just someone trying to sabotage a wedding, a play, or any other event you can come up with.  In this case, someone is sabotaging George Fayne's dream come true - to experience life on the road with #vanlife (as it is referred to over and over in the story)!  When she wins a contest that will allow her to take a social media travel influencer's van across the country for a week, she of course begs Nancy and Bess to go with her.  They reluctantly agree (since when has Nancy never really liked the outdoors?), and the adventure begins!  It should be a simple trip - follow the travelogue prepared for them by the van's owners (Matt and his wife, Sammy) and post photos and videos of their fun experiences along the way.  What could possibly go wrong?

 

Well, for starters, Nancy Drew is going on the trip, so you know there's going to be trouble.  She is a trouble-magnet like no one else (well, except perhaps Jessica Fletcher - you never want to be invited to on one of her parties!), and this time is no different.  Before they even finish their first day, the van has car issues, and it turns out the engine has a major oil leak.  Matt and Sammy are not pleased the girls are already delayed, but they find them a new campsite, since they won't be able to make it to their originally intended first stop.  Okay, does not seem too bad yet.  But that night, Nancy hears noises outside, and when she goes to investigate, she discovers two of their tires have been slashed!  Nancy is confident someone did this intentionally, but Bess and George convince her she probably just drove over some sharp rocks the night before when they pulled in.  So, there's another delay, which makes Matt and Sammy even more upset.  And, as if that were not enough, when they finally get on their way and stop to eat, Nancy catches someone who she believes was casing the van - she even finds the side door open and several coffee mugs shattered.  Once again, Bess and George come up with plausible explanations, but Nancy is no longer believing it.  Someone is following them, and she's determined to prove it.

 

And so the mystery goes, as every stop along the way produces one more problem after another.  Until, as the girls are nearing Las Vegas, they van is stolen in a small town that claims to never have any crime!  Matt and Sammy have reached their breaking point, and they threaten to sue the girls for the cost of the decked-out van if they do not find it.  George is heart-broken that her dream trip has been ruined; Bess is upset to the point where she is ready to go home; but Nancy is more determined than ever to prove someone has been intentionally stalking and sabotaging their trip.  She also believes it has to be an inside job, as George has told her that no one outside of Matt and Sammy and their assistant, Lilah, knew the itinerary for the trip, and no one could have possibly known of the change in campgrounds due to the various delays.  Yet, someone managed to find out, and Nancy is almost certain it is one of the esocial media followers who has been dogging them online since they started the journey - now all she has to do is find him, prove it, and get the van back before their deadline to have it to California!

 

While the sabotage trope is a tiresome repeat, I will say the whole #vanlife adventure trip was rather a unique twist on it.  Following Nancy, George, and Bess as they take a road trip "through Iowa, Nebraska, Colorado, Utah, on into Nevada, and then California" (p. 8) was actually kind of fun - particularly when the close quarters lead to some rather testy arguments (which would only be natural, even among the best of friends!).  It was also interesting to see that Bess is taking a university class on poetry, and for part of the trip, her focus is on finishing a paper that she has due on Wordsworth (p. 9).  It is not too often they talk about the girls being in school, and it's refreshing to have it mentioned she is taking university classes (as it means she is not a pre-teen or in her early teens, as the cover art always seems to infer).  We also get absolute confirmation that River Heights is in Illinois, because as the girls head out on their trip, and they cross over their first state line, George cries out, "Good-bye, Illinois" (p. 30).  e

 

Now, something I did find odd is a reference to Bess having tried out for the track team in high school (p. 40).  I realize that since the Girl Detective series, the characters of Bess and George have had some depth added to them - George has since become a tech guru, and Bess has become a mechanical genius.  But at no time has Bess ever shown any inclination to enjoy sports, let alone try out for a track team!  Makes me wonder whether the author was simply not familiar enough with the past history of the character, or if the ghostwriter simply wanted to put their own creative touch on Bess.  Either way, this aspect of the character simply did not click for me.  What did click, though, is later in the story when Nancy and George are trying to convince her to stay with them and not go home, and Nancy suggests that when they make it to California, "Maybe we'll run into Pedro Pascal" (p. 121).  It seems in this incarnation, Bess is really infatuated with the famous actor!  Now THAT seems more like the Bess I know and love!

 

There are a couple of elements to the story that I thought were unnecessary and certainly did not belong in a book aimed at 8 to 12 year olds.  I understand these are modern times, and kids are exposed to a lot more "adult" themes than children the same age 20 years ago or more; however, I still think books for this age group should maintain a certain level of innocence about them, and certain subject matter (such as extramarital affairs or other sexual references) has no business being placed into the story.  The references to the small toilet in the van, and how one goes about flushing it is one thing - that's something kids this age would probably laugh at and find a bit "icky," yet funny.  But references to mistresses and lovers is going too far in my book, and those scenes immediately took me out of the story and definitely left a distaste in the my mouth for a story I was otherwise trying to enjoy.  Children grow up faster than they should these days anyway, so why add to it in a children's mystery book?

 

Since we no longer get any references to the next mystery (no ad for it on the back of the paperback or on the inside back flap of the dust jacket for the hard cover), guess we are going to have to wait a number of months before we find out if a 28th book is going to be solicited and published.  We are only four years away from Nancy Drew's 100th birthday, so here's hoping Simon & Schuster can at least give us four more books so we can hit that centennial mark!

 

RATING:  7 fried laptops out of 10 for a somewhat decent story that could have offered up a much better mystery if it had involved a "ghost" or missing treasure or literally anything other than sabotage! 

The Mystery of the Tolling Bell - A Book By Any Other Name, No. 2

Way back in 1946, Grosset & Dunlap first published the twenty-third Nancy Drew mystery, titled The Mystery of the Tolling Bell.  About twenty years later, Christian Literature Crusade, with permission by Pickering & Inglis, Ltd., published a book written by Ellen Jane MacLeod by that same name (The Mystery of the Tolling Bell), which I happened across by pure chance at a local used bookstore.  Now, here we are a year later, and wonder of all wonders, I come across yet a THIRD title by that same name!  Now, I realize that some titles have a tendency to be used over and over (such as common phrases like "Double Indemnity" or "Web of Lies" or such); but for this unique of a title to be used not once, not twice, but three different times by three different authors in three different decades - well, the coincidence is uncanny!

 

This version of The Mystery of the Tolling Bell is written by Alan E. Losure, is an Indiana writer who enjoys writing historical fiction.  Unlike the previous two stories, Losure's tale is a murder mystery written for an adult audience, nor for children.  That does not mean it has sex, violence, and foul language; rather, it means the subject matter (murder!) is not something normally intended for children to read.  Additionally, while the two books for young adults were set in the present time (well, "present" as far as the date when they were originally published), this story is set back in 1898, just before the turn of the century.  Thus, there are no motor cars that would enable to characters to speed from one place to the next, and telephones are about the only technological advance - we're talking about "old west" style living, with saloons, general stores, and such.  However, as the title would suggest, the mystery does involve the mysterious tolling of a bell - in this case, warning the citizens of Gas City, Indiana that death is about to come to their small town!

 

Losure does write an interesting story that is multi-layered and not as clear-cut as one may expect.  In fact, the book is broken up into two parts - the first part being "The Mystery of the Tolling Bell" and the second part being "Doctor Death."  While the underlying mystery is threaded through both parts, they actually have very distinct factors driving the plots.  In the first half, the story centers around Herbert Ainsworth, a young man graduating from the local high school, who, at his graduation ceremony, announces to the townspeople how he has suffered at the hands of three other young men in his class for the past four years and warns them that their time is coming - theirs, as well as the school administrators who allowed the bullying to continue unchecked.  The second half of the book is focused on members of the mob who come to Gas City to begin an "insurance" racket, forcing the businesses to pay part of their profits for protection from ... well, protection from the very people to whom they are being forced to pay the insurance!

 

 "The Mystery of the Tolling Bell" is the mystery that asks - who tolls that school bell before each murder (or attempted murder)?  The bell is high up in a tower, behind locked doors, and no one is ever seen anywhere near the scene at the time.  Yet, each time that bell tolls thirteen times (made me think of the Penny Parker mystery, The Clock Strikes Thirteen), and each time, there is a murder, or an attempted murder, at least.  All clues point to poor Herbert, who threatened the other boys in his class, since the two who are murdered were two of the three boys who bullied him, and the one who was nearly burned to death in his own outhouse was the school superintendent. Herbert claims he is innocent, and it is not until the last remaining bully is caught trying to torch Herbert's small shack that the town realizes it was actually that third boy - or was it?

 

This is where "Doctor Death" begins.  With the third bully hauled out of town to face criminal charges at the county seat, the citizens of Gas City think the horrors have ended.  But then the bodies start to pile up again, each one with a note signed by "Doctor Death," warning of more to come!  While this is going on, some out-of-town mobsters have made their way into Gas City and have set up an "insurance" scheme to force businesses to pay for their protection - and when they find out about Herbert's amazing mathematical skills, they threaten him into helping them.  Ultimately, Herbert comes up with a plan to outwit the crooks, while, unbeknownst to him, the real killer has entered the wrong house to do his next killing.  As the story reaches its climax, some startling secrets are revealed (including the REAL reason behind all of those killings) and a statewide criminal organization is finally brought to its knees.

 

Losure writes a great mystery that is fast-paced, yet still has time to fully flesh out all of his characters so that the reader actually feels for each and every one of them.  In addition, Losure includes considerable photographs of people that he identifies as the characters from the story, as well as vintage photos of various sites from around Gas City during the 1890s. At the end of the book, Losure explains about his use of the Cabinet Cards to "enhance the story" by giving a physical face to each of his main characters.  As far as the use of the tolling bell, this was likely taken from the old expression that "when a bell tolls, someone is going to die," which expression is said to be rooted in the tradition of churches ringing bells to announce that someone has passed away.

 

Overall, a pretty good read, even though there were a number of spelling errors and mixed up names (at one point, Herbert is sent to the telephone company to review the books and try to correct the payroll ledgers - when he enters the building, the story says "Wilbert assured them that it was his top priority" [p. 234], when it was actually Herbert who assured them), leaving me to wonder if any editing was done before the book was published.  I enjoyed the revelation as to the killer's identity and motive, and the pictures scattered throughout the book DID enhance my reading of the story.  At the end, Losure breaks the fourth wall to ask the reader "what will the future hold in store for them and a few other characters?" to which he informs the reader that such "answers will be contained within the pages of my next book" (p. 238).  Those two lines gave me a nostalgic feel of the old children's mysteries from the '30s, '40s, and '50s when each book would give a small tag at the end, letting readers know what the next book would be.

 

RATING:  9 helpings of salted meats, breads, and pickles out of 10 for a great mix of history and fiction with the superbly plotted murder mystery at its heart!

Exploring Series Books in Florida, Part 1 - the Space Coast

After our fun-filled exploration of Cooperstown, New York (The Secret of Mirror Bay), my friend, Pam, and I decided it would be fun to take a look at some books set in my home state of Florida and, if we found any real locations referenced in the books, to take some time out and explore those places!  Well, we quickly discovered that there are quite a number of books set in Florida - from Betty Gordon to the Bobbsey Twins; from Connie Blair to the Happy Hollisters; from the Moving Picture Girls to Nan Sherwood; from the Outdoor Girls to Vicki Barr; from the Hardy Boys to Nancy Drew; and quite a few others.  We were astounded by how many young sleuths made their way to the Sunshine State for adventure and mystery, and we could not wait to delve into these books and see just what actual places we would find in our reading!

 

Once we started reading the various books, we quickly realized the best way to do this was to group the books by location, so that we could explore one location at a time.  Pam made plans to come down last autumn for our first excursion, planned for Tampa; but our plans got rather sidetracked by that pesky Hurricane Milton! However, we were not waylaid; rather, we simply altered our objective(which, as we learned later, turned out for the best!) and started with a different location - in this instance, we headed over to the East Coast instead of the West Coast and visited some locations that the Hardy Boys, the Happy Hollisters, and Nancy Drew visited in some of their mysteries.

 

The Happy Hollisters and the Missile Town Mystery, first published in 1961, was the first of our books to feature the Space Coast, as it is referred to here in Florida.  In this book, the Hollister family visits their friends, the Davis family, who reside in the town of Cocoa (p. 28), and they make visits to Merritt Island and Cocoa Beach, where Cape Kennedy a/k/a Cape Canaveral is located on one end of the beach (p. 34).  The book even discusses Banana River, which runs between the Cape and the town of Merritt Island (p. 94).  We drove through these towns and along the river as we made out way down the coast.  We visited Cape Canaveral, just like the Hollisters, who learned that "Canaveral" meant "canebrake" in Spanish, referring to the sugar cane that was raised in the area (p. 53).  It is likely the Cape looked considerably different back in the early 1960s compared to today, but the location of the Space Center remains the same.

 

The Hollisters also visited Patrick Air Force Base, located at the other end of the beach (p. 35).  Pam and I drove down the causeway, hoping to have an opportunity to visit the base, and we had a bit of difficulty getting in, as the entrance is some bit before the actual base itself.  Also, something that threw us off a bit is the fact that the air force based has since been rename - it is now called U.S. Space Force: Patrick Space Force Base!  Which just goes to show just how far we have come since the 1960s!  Unfortunately, due to security concerns these days, casual visitors are not allowed onto the base, so we were not able to get beyond the welcome center (although I think the servicemen at the desk were taken aback by the idea that the base actually appeared in children's mystery books!).

 

Following the trail of the Hollisters, our next stop was Cocoa Beach itself.  In the book, the Hollister children comb the beach, hoping to find some part of the missile that exploded just after take-off (pp. 35-37, etc).  Pam and I did not necessarily search for parts of a missile, but we did search for shells and enjoyed the cool breeze coming in off the Atlantic Ocean!

 

 

It is easy to see why the Hollisters had so much fun while in Florida - they got to enjoy the sunny beach, they got to experience the excitement of a missile launch at Cape Kennedy a/k/a Cape Canaveral, and they were able to experience what life is like for those who live here.  While Jerry West (Andrew Svenson) did embellish the story, including some fictional locations and events, he did include enough real locations that we were able to follow in the family's footsteps.  Sadly, time did not permit us the opportunity to go to the port and see about fishing for shrimp (p. 113) or snapper (p. 147) - perhaps another time!

 

Moving right along, we look at the next book on our list, which is Nancy Drew's eighteenth mystery,

Mystery of the Moss-Covered Mansion (revised text), which was published in 1971, just ten years after the Happy Hollisters book. In the revised text of this book, the story for which was completely different from the original, Kennedy Space Center plays a central part of the mystery.  Therefore, since Pam and I were already there, we decided to make the most of it!

 

 

 

Nancy and her friends start off at the Visitor's Information Center Op. 30), and so Pam and I began our adventure there, taking note of the mock-ups of missile and rockets (p. 30). Inside the Information Center, there were plenty of toy rockets, mock space candy, and books about the Center and the history of man's reaching for the stars.

 

The next stop was the Vehicle Assembly Building, which George called "a real skyscraper" (p. 32).  There can be no doubt she was correct in her description, as Pam and I had to look way up to see the top of that building, which is a whopping 52 stories high! We would have loved to have gone inside and explored a bit, but unfortunately, time simply did not permit that day (remember, we were doing all of this right before a hurricane was going to cross the state, so there was not a lot that was open!).

 

At the end of Moss-Covered Mansion, Nancy and her friend were fortunate enough to countdown to the launch of a rocket (pp. 175-76); while we did get to see a huge countdown clock, unfortunately it was not connected to any actual launch that day (I can't begin to imagine them trying to launch a rocket right before a hurricane!). 

For the next book on our journey, we had to jump ahead twelve years to 1983, with the publication of The Hardy Boys No. 79, Sky Sabotage.  In this book, Frank and Joe do quite a bit of traveling around Central Florida, from Orlando over to the Space Coast, then back inland, then down to south Orlando, and back to the Space Coast.  While the timing of all that travel is quite a bit off (trust me I've driven those distances, and there is no way those Hardy Boys could have made it in the times they did!).

 

This book only contained a few real references, the first being the boys' arrival into Florida at the Orlando International Airport.  This is the same airport into which Pam flew down from Canada, and I can promise you that the OIA (as it is referred to here in Central Florida) is quite a bit different and much, MUCH larger than it was back in 1983.  It is doubtful the boys would have had as much difficulty as travelers today have in navigating the terminals.

 

In their travels throughout the book, the brothers make a stop at the police headquarters in Melbourne (p. 76), a city that is south of Cape Canaveral and Patrick Space Force Base (but still located in the same county).  In our own travels, we learned that the City of Melbourne has built a new headquarters since then, so the police station there now would not have been the one the Hardy Boys visited during their trip.

 

Probably the biggest nod to a real location in the book is when the boys pay a visit to "Fantasieworld" theme park (pp. 104, 107, and 108), in which they see rides such as "Outer Space Planet," "Deep Sea Submarine Ride," "Bear Dance," Island Pirates," and "Haunted House" - all of which are obvious takes on Walt Disney World and its famous rides, Space Mountain, 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea, Country Bear Jamboree, Pirates of the Caribbean, and the Haunted Mansion.  We did not go inside of Disney (do you have any idea the cost of tickets these days?  egads!), but we did find it amusing how conspicuous the ghostwriter made the names of those rides.

 

Now, for the last book on this jaunt, we only had to jump ahead two years, to 1985, when the Hardy Boys once again visited Florida in The Skyfire Puzzle (which was originally going to be titled The Mystery of the Space Shuttle).  This book finds the brothers experiencing way more of Kennedy Space Center and Cape Canaveral than we ever could, since they were not only able to explore a lot of secure areas, but they actually get to go up into space in a shuttle!  I do not think either Pam or I was ready for that!

 

 

 

Since the boys were invited to parts of Cape Canaveral that is only open to employees, Pam and I thought we would try and sneak a peak at one of those "crew member" only areas.  We got to take a peak through the fence before a very nice employee led us away and to the actual guest entrance.  

 

In the book, the Hardys were able to tour " detailed mock-up of the shuttle" (p. 84), as well as visit the Vehicle Assembly Building (p. 86).  As indicated above, we did not get to see the inside of the Vehicle Assembly Building, but we did get to see a number of missiles on display at the Space Center.

 

And last, but not least, we did pass by the same Mosquito Lagoon that Frank and Joe saw in the book (p. 26) as they were making their way to Kennedy Space Center.  We learned that this lagoon is one of the least developed regions along the East Coast of Florida and it actually has a population of bottlenose dolphins that take up residence there.  We were not lucky enough to see any of those dolphins as we passed by the lagoon.  Kennedy Space Center, along with the cities of New Smyrna Beach and Edgewater, adjoin the lagoon.

 

Pam and I had a grand time exploring the Space Coast region, searching out the locations that the Hollisters, Nancy, Frank, and Joe visited in their books.  We know that Andrew Svenson actually visited the area prior to his writing of the Happy Hollisters story, which is why that book has the most accurate depictions of the area (at the time). Harriet Stratemeyer Adams is credited for writing the revised Nancy Drew book, and Neal Barrett, Jr. is said to have written The Skyfire Puzzle for the Hardy Boys.  Both of those books have at least some semblance of real locations within the stories.  The other Hardy Boys mystery, however, has very few real locations referenced, and I was unable to find the identity of the ghostwriter - leading one to believe that the writer may not have had a much knowledge of Central Florida and the Space Coast as the others did.

 

Having now toured the Kennedy Space Center, Cape Canaveral, and its surrounding areas for these four books, we wondered where our next adventure (after the hurricane passed through!) would take us...

 

COMING SOON:  Exploring Series Books in Florida - Part 2 (St. Augustine)!

Nancy Drew Diaries, No. 26 - Superstitions of "The Scottish Play"

The Nancy Drew Diaries continues with the 26th entry into the series, pushing it past the 25 books of the Hardy Boys Adventure series (which, sadly, has not seen a new book in two years, leading one to believe that Simon & Schuster has closed that series - whether there will be another reboot with the upcoming 100 year anniversary in 2027 remains to be seen...).  Since reducing the series to only one book per year, there was hope that perhaps we might see a bump up in the length and quality of the stories.  Yes, many of the plots of this Diaries series have been interesting, but with the super-large font and low page count, it has definitely not measured up to the original series.  Now we are getting books that are 190 pages in length or longer; yet, when the font size is considered, we are likely only getting 160 pages or so of actual story content.  This book weighs in at 197 pages, and with its story centered around the theater, I was truly hoping for a great mystery ...

Superstitions of "The Scottish Play" provides readers with some new insight into not only Ned Nickerson, but also Nancy Drew and Bess Marvin.  We discover in this mystery that Ned is wanting to spread his wings and try something new, so he auditions for a role in the University's upcoming production of Shakespeare's Macbeth.  At the same time, we find Bess Marvin stepping out of her comfort zone to try not only songwriting, but also singing as well!  All of which leaves Nancy pondering the question - is solving mysteries all she really wants to do for the rest of her life?  Should she not go out and try some other hobbies to expand her experiences in life?  Definitely a question the Nancy Drew of the 1900s would have never even considered; but we are living in the 2000s now, and as society changes, it is inevitable that our favorite teenage sleuth might start to evolve as well.

And speaking of "teenage sleuth" ... there are shades of fourth-wall breaking in this book, as several times Nancy makes mention of her status as a teen detective.  "...if you google 'teenage detective,' my name might come up" she muses on page 4.  Of course, in that same paragraph, she also mentions that "this girl in California named Veronica Mars" is also a teen detective, with whom she tried to get in touch!  I guess this places Veronica Mars and Nancy Drew in the same universe, according to this author anyway.  We also get references to Katharine Hepburn and Meryl Streep (p. 72), along with playwright Lynn Nottage, who slipped and said the name of "The Scottish Play" in the theater, and the next day her mother died (p. 60) - which is a true story.  This, of course, supports the superstition that one never, never, NEVER says the name of the actual play (Macbeth) in a theater, even moreso when you are doing a production of the play.  It is always referred to simply as "The Scottish Play."  Hence, the title to the book.

And this sets up the supposed mystery in this book, which, I must say, is very weak at best.  Ned, who does get a part in the play, slips up and says the word Macbeth during a rehearsal, which infuriates the overly dramatic director (who is quite the diva!) and nearly causes the show to be cancelled.  But the director will not get paid if he doesn't direct, so the show must go on.  But then a stage light falls from above (depicted somewhat on the cover to the book), giving everyone the idea that perhaps the play is now cursed.  Then the director himself falls through the trap door on the stage, which is not easily opened.  Then on the night of the play, all of the costumes are covered in mud.  The director is convinced the play is cursed, but Nancy knows otherwise.  Someone is trying to sabotage the play, but the question is who?  To be honest, there are no real clues in the story to point to any one suspect, and the ultimate revelation of the culprit comes a bit out of nowhere.  There is no way the reader would be able to figure out the identity of the saboteur just from reading the story, which is a bit disappointing.  I prefer when there are clues, no matter how subtle, that lead the reader, right along with Nancy, to solve the mystery.

Now, with regard to that new insight into Bess mentioned above.  Well, in this story, Bess suddenly has the inspiration to not only write songs, but sing them as well.  This leaves George and Nancy in a bit of a quandary, as Bess' voice is not exactly what one would call stellar.  But how can they tell her and burst her newfound dreams?  This subplot is a bit out there and really has nothing whatsoever to do with the rest of the story, other than to provide Bess with the reason to pester Nancy about finding a new hobby for herself.  She gives a shot at set decorating, which, of course, allows her to be close to Ned and also to be in the theater to solve the mystery when it arises.  Otherwise, the whole "songwriter/singer" part of the book feels more like filler than anything else.

As usual, we get very little characterization when it comes to the supporting cast (other than the director), and so it makes it all the more difficult to actually feel anything for any of the characters.  Sure, the author provides some surface information - Simon is British, Cassie is a hairdresser, Ricky has a boyfriend, Dale has been an actor before, etc. - but the author spends very little time on any of the characters, so the reader knows way too little about them to sift out any possible motives for the sabotage.  While the plot itself is a good one (having done theater for some years, I am familiar with how superstitious actors, directors, and crew can be!), it simply is not executed as well as it could have been.  Whether this is because of a word-count limitation by the publisher or lack of passion on the part of the author, I suppose we will never know.

I will say that the book ends on a note that could easily be seen as the conclusion to this series.  As the girls discuss their various hobbies, Nancy makes the remark, "It's good to stretch outside your usual things ... It may not be your life's work ... but you just might find something that makes you happy" (p. 197).  And in her closing diary notation (you know what I'm talking about - how each of these books opens and closes with a "diary" page), Nancy writes, "...I really did enjoy helping to design and build the sets of Ned's play.  But you know what? I loved solving the mystery more.  Maybe I will try to do some more drawing and sketching.  But I think I've already found my true calling..." (p. 198).  And since there is no ad for the next book, but instead, and ad for the previous book in the series (which, by the way, Nancy makes reference to a couple of times in the story), one could easily see this as the last of the Nancy Drew Diaries.  I suppose only time will tell...

7 footprints in the dust out of 10 for at least attempting to take the characters in some different directions and giving us a mystery in one of my favorite places - the theater!