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Sunday, June 29, 2025

Dana Girls Mystery Stories No. 4 - A Three Cornered Mystery

The fourth and final Dana Girls Mystery Story ghost-written by Hardy Boys author Leslie McFarlane was a bit better than the third book, thankfully.  It has been somewhat interesting to read all four of McFarlane's books in this series, especially comparing them with the outlines for the books provided by the Stratemeyer Syndicate - finding the commonalities among the books, seeing what aspects were provided by McFarlane and what was required by the outline, and reading how the stories varied in tone and style based upon his circumstances at the time he was writing the books. There is a consistent timeline for the books (from autumn to Thanksgiving to Christmas, and now to springtime with this fourth mystery), which is rare to see in series books where the protagonists never age - it's almost a shame the Syndicate did not keep with that timeline as the series went on under different ghostwriters.
 
A Three Cornered Mystery
bears a very unusual name, leaving the reader to wonder exactly what it means.  I have to give them credit for the creativity, as even I was curious as to the meaning.  By the final chapters of the story, the reason for the title becomes clear, and it is extremely clever (you don't really think I'm going to give it away and ruin the surprise, do you?).  But let's start at the beginning, shall we?  The story starts off innocently enough - Jean and Louise are out riding horses when they chance to meet a real estate man from Oak Falls by the name of Taylor Lott (and if you know anything about real estate, you'll get that pun right off the bat!).  It turns out Mr. Lott is quite upset, as a gentleman who was working for him turned out to be a crook - stole quite a large sum of rental income from various properties Mr. Lott manages, as well as other important documents (p. 4).  The Dana Girls immediately smell a mystery!  Well, as it turns out, this mystery has so many coincidences in it, there was simply no way the sisters could not solve it!
 
Here there girls are told that Mr. Lott is looking for Edward Carrillo, and coincidentally enough, as soon as Mr. Lott and his assistant leave the tea room, who should show up but Mr. Carrillo (p. 9)!  They ply him with innocent questions to learn where he is headed, so they can pass the information along to Mr. Lott.  Upon returning to Starhurst, they read a letter from their Aunt Harriet who informs them her old school chum, Elizabeth Flower, is staying at the Danas' home because a man named Carrillo stole her money (p. 16)! As if that coincidence were not surprising enough, when a reporter by the name of Edith Darrow shows up at Starhurst and invites the Danas to spend the weekend at her farm, the girls are shocked to discover that Carrillo was a former border at the farm (p. 29)!  In the barn where Carrillo spent his time, the girls discover some hidden papers, which include a lottery ticket (p. 30), which plays an important part in helping the girls track down Mr. Carrillo later on.
 
Well, the coincidences keep coming - when the girls find the Darrows have disappeared from their own farm, a policeman shows up looking for the victim of a car accident who was hit near the farm - not only does that police officer turn out to be a distant relative of Aunt Harriet's friend, Elizabeth Flower (p. 50), but the mysterious man who showed up after the Darrows went missing is the car accident victim!  Later in the story, when the girls are staying with Mrs. Flower to assist her while she is allegedly ill, they make the connection that the accident victim is actually Mrs. Flower's nephew, James (p. 80).   And when Mrs. Flower's housekeeper quits, the Dana Girls just happen to be at the Darrow farm when Mrs. Carrillo arrives looking for her son - and she just happens to be a housekeeper who is looking for work (pp. 111-12).
 
Oh, but wait!  That's not all!  A detective hired by Mrs. Flower to locate Mr. Carrillo reveals to the Dana Girls that he has bigger fish to fry, as he is on the trail of an international spy by the name of Kurt Hassell (p. 148).  Well, when Uncle Ned takes the girls with him to New York City for their spring break, they stop at a hotel in New Jersey along the way where Uncle Ned accidentally enters the wrong room.  As fate would have it, the woman in that room has a photo of a man she says is Raymond Del Mort, but who the girls immediately recognize as the criminal, Kurt Hassell (pp. 158-59)!  "Odd coincidence, isn't it?" the woman in the room comments (p. 160).  Yes, I'd certainly say so!  Then, of course, when tracking down Carrillo in New York City, they are super-surprised to learn the address they find for Carrillo is the same address as the one given them by the woman for Kurt Hassell (p. 164)!  I mean, I know coincidences always play a large part in any mystery - let's face it, without them, it is unlikely these teenage sleuths in series books would ever be able to solve a mystery!  But this book is filled with so many, perhaps the title should have been "A Multi-Coincidence Mystery"!
 
Aside from the way-too-many coincidences, there is a fairly decent underlying mystery.  Two women (mother and daughter) go mysteriously missing from their house, while the Dana Girls are staying out in the barn (hoping to catch themselves a criminal), and Jean and Louise have no explanation.  Jean sneaking into the empty house in the middle of a storm, the unexplained disappearance of the women, and the unexpected appearance of the police, together with the mysterious stranger who showed up in the barn and then disappeared when the girls take the cops out to him all add up to a laudable attempt at integrating some gothic elements into the mystery.  Adult readers will likely figure out what happened to the women, but I can imagine young readers will be spooked by the entire scene - after all, a stormy night always adds that terrifying element to any story.
 
I did find several aspects of the story humorous, particularly the disguises the girls don in order to trick Edward Carrillo.  While in New York, the girls buy "two cheap dresses, which were extra long and undeniably dowdy" as well as "two paid of cheap spectacles" (p. 171).  Simply by donning unflattering dresses and glasses, the girls are able to visit Carrillo without him recognizing them as the Dana Girls.  What was so funny is that when Carrillo leaves, and the girls confront Mrs. Darrow and her daughter, Louise "removed the spectacles and tossed her hat onto the divan.  Jean did likewise" (p. 177).  They second they remove those glasses, Edith Darrow cries out, "The Dana girls!" (p. 177).  This is especially amusing to any comic book fan, as Superman has hidden his identity for 90 years behind a pair of glasses as Clark Kent, with no one recognizing him - so why shouldn't the Dana Girls use the same trick?
 
Ferdinand Warren once again provides the art for the internal illustrations; however, the four illustrations in this story have a distinctly different feel to them when compared with the prior books.  The black and white illustrations are much heavier on shadows, and the lines are not nearly as succinct as previous books in the series. Not sure what caused the difference, but if I hadn't seen Warren's name listed on the title page, I would have assumed it was a different artist.
 
A few other tidbits I noticed in the story - one being the name of the lawyer that Mrs. Flower calls upon to draw up her will.  His name is Josiah Jarvis (p. 77), which struck me as odd - for those who are Nancy Drew fans, you may recall that Nancy Drew's first case involved a missing will of a man named Josiah Crowley!  To have two stories only five years apart use the same name for a character connected with a will is a bit of a coincidence (hmmmm.....).  Another name that caught my eye is the last name of the reporter and her mother - "Darrow."  Fans of Mildred Wirt Benson will easily recognize that name, as Benson wrote a four book series (published in 1930 and 1931) whose title character was named Ruth "Darrow."  The name appears in the outline, so it was not created by McFarlane; rather, it was used by the Stratemeyers (leading one to wonder if perhaps it was a way of poking at Benson, who was writing the Nancy Drew series at the time this fourth Dana Girls book was published).  Outside of names, the book reveals that the Danas used to collect cigar bands for a brief period of time, and as such, they happened to have a book on the various bands (another coincidence!) that they use to disprove Lettie's attempt to make the other girls at the school think she is receiving letters from an important Count (p. 63).  I suppose it was good fortune they used to have that hobby, and that they happened to have that book at the school with them in order to reveal Lettie's lies!
 
Finally, the second cover art for this book is less than stellar - it merely shows a close-up of Louise and Jean against a dark green background, with Louise holding an oil lamp.  I'm not really sure what the scene is supposed to represent (unless it is from when the girls are exploring the empty Darrow house, looking for their hosts). It is probably the most lackluster cover of the entire series!  While the collage covers of the original editions are not my favorite art style, I have to admit, those scenes depicted for this book are a far cry more exciting than the art used for the wrap-spine dust jacket!  Not sure who the artist was, or who gave the artist the instructions for the scene, but if it were me, I definitely would not be claiming it as my work!
 
While not the best of the series, I will say this book was certainly a better (and a bit more believable) story than the last one! And with this book, we reach the end of Leslie McFarlane's writing of the Dana Girls Mystery Stories, for with the fifth book, Mildred Wirt (Benson) took over the writing chores.  It will certainly be interesting to see how her writing of the sisters compares with version established by McFarlane in the first four books.
 
RATING:   7 beds of rattlesnakes sunning themselves on a rock out of 10 for an interesting tale, if for no other reason than the variety of unique characters thrown together for one story!

Monday, June 2, 2025

Dana Girls Mystery Stories No. 3 - In the Shadow of the Tower

Book three of the Dana Girls Mystery Stories is author Leslie McFarlane's third entry into this girls' series from the 1930s, and I can see from this book how McFarlane was struggling with his writing of this series.  In the first two books, the stories flowed fairly well, and there was plenty of excitement and fun to move the story along; however, this book had considerably more unnecessary exposition that was not readily seen in the first two.  Perhaps he was simply more comfortable writing stories about boys, or maybe he simply could not settle into a groove with the Dana Girls; whatever the reason, this third book falls a bit short from the first two, with too many mysteries and too many convenient coincidences.
 
In the Shadow of the Tower
continues the time line of the Danas, with this story being set in December (after the first book was September and the second was November).  The story center around a young girl who the Danas not only befriend but offer to help after accidentally causing her to lose a very important letter that also contained a thousand dollar bill (yes, you read that right!).  I have to admit, I was rather surprised to think that this girl, still in her teens, would be carrying around a thousand dollar bill in the early 1930s!  In today's money, that bill would be worth nearly $24,000!  Can you imagine carrying that amount of money with you everywhere you went?  But, that's exactly what Josephine "Josy" Sykes was doing when the Dana Girls happened upon her in the woods near Mohawk Lake.  Now, it is up to Jean and Louise to find that letter and the missing money and restore them to their rightful owner.
 
The story has some very odd elements to it.  First, when the Danas first see Josy, because of her deformity, "a hump that distorted [her] back, giving [her] a grotesque and dwarfed appearance" (p. 3), and the tattered clothes she is wearing, they mistake her for a boy.  They quickly learn Josy is a girl who ran away from the Home for Crippled Children at Bonny Lake (p. 13).  She ran away because at the same time she received the letter from her uncle with the money in it, the cash proceeds from a charity to benefit the Home was also stolen, and Josy was afraid she would be accused.  The sisters agree to help her, of course, but they find it will not be easy, because upon their arrival at Starhurst, Lettie Briggs and Ina Mason are the first to see Josy and immediately make fun of her, causing her to run off.
 
Throughout the entire book, there is an emphasis on Josy's hunchback and deformed nature, causing people to shun her, make fun of her, be shocked at her appearance, and fear her.  In fact, one of the characters in the book - Mammy Cleo, a cook - describes her as a "supernatural creature" that is "twisted and deformed" (p. 56).  McFarlane goes on to write how "the colored folk in the vicinity ... built up monstrous and weird legend" about Josy and her appearance (p. 71).  All of these descriptions and reactions would lead the reader to believe that Josy is horridly disfigured and frightening to look at, and so, I thought it admirable that the Danas overlooked her physical appearance and offered her their friendship and their aid in finding the missing money.  But then, at the end of the book, once the girls have successfully solved all the mysteries (and there are plenty of them in this book!), we suddenly learn that Josy's deformity is not so bad after all - "[w]ith the help of the Dana girls she had done some shopping ... New dresses had been chosen so that her deformity was scarcely noticeable. Happiness and good fortune had erased the pitiful lines from her face, and her natural attractiveness had been given a chance to assert itself" (p. 205).  Utterly amazing what a beautiful dress can do for a girl - transform her from a grotesque girl with a distorted back to a naturally attractive girl whose deformity was barely noticed!  (I realize there is a high level of sarcasm there, but such a transformation defies all ability to believe - and we cannot blame McFarlane for this one, as the change was specifically dictated in the outline from Edna Stratemeyer Squier.
 

Another strange thing about this book is the mystery surrounding the stolen money at the children's home. The Danas assure Josy they will find a way to clear her name and solve that mystery, and more than once, a nurse taking care of Constance Melbourne (an artist who lives next to Bessie Marsh, the Danas' cousin with whom they visit during the Christmas holidays), tells Jean and Louise she believes a Mrs. Rita Rye, a Trustee for the home, is the guilty party.  At no time during the entire book do the Dana girls actually visit the Home for Crippled Children at Bonny Lake, but suddenly, in the very last chapter on the next to the last page, the Danas announce that Josy has been cleared and the "real thief has confessed" (p. 216).  The thief did, indeed, turn out to be Rita Rye, who admitted to taking the money to pay overdue bills (p. 216).  For something that played such an important factor in Josy running away, one would have thought it would have made for a good mystery for the girls to solve; instead, it merely becomes an afterthought, mentioned only in passing at the very end to tie up that loose end.
 
Yet another mystery in this book centers around a stolen piece of art, painted by Ms. Melbourne.  A scam artist by the name of Claude Fayle, steals the portrait and passes it off as his own at an art show in the city of Majestic.  As it just so happens, Mrs. Crandall has plans to take the girls of Starhurst to that very art show.  And, by pure coincidence, Mrs. Crandall has invited Mr. Fayle to the school to discuss his art, unaware that the Dana girls have already met him and know he is a thief and a fraud.  This part of the mystery actually plays up nicely, as the sisters have a difficult time meeting Mr. Fayle and accusing him of his theft, and it ultimately becomes a climactic revelation made at the art show itself, just as Mr. Fayle is about to be awarded a medal for the portrait.  Of all the mysteries in this story, this one was probably the one I most enjoyed reading. 

One thing I do want to make note of is that this book features the internal illustration upon which the end pages for these early Dana Girls books was based.  The illustration by Ferdinand Warren inserted between pages 66 and 67 of the story features Jean and Louise finding a note from Josy left under their door at their cousin's house (see illustration to the left here).  It depicts Jean kneeling down to pick up and read the strange note, while Louise stands behind, looking over her shoulder.  The same scene was redrawn (whether by Warren or not is a good question) and expanded upon for the double-spread end pages (see above).  The end pages go beyond the door shown in the illustration and give way to a chair, a painting on the wall, and a grandfather clock standing beside them.   We also get a better view of Louise in the end pages, as she is closer to the wall, so that we can see her full face rather than a hidden profile as in the internal illustration.  

Last, but certainly not least, I must point out McFarlane's habit of inserting the name of the book into his mysteries.  In the first two books, the titles were casually inserted into dialogue at the very end of the story.  In this book, however, McFarlane really outdid himself - he managed to work the title into the story not once, not twice, but a total of NINE TIMES!  And this does not even count the title to Chapter XVI ("The Shadow Beneath the Tower").  

        p. 56 - in the snow "in the shadow of the tower"
        p. 86 - transpiring "in the very shadow of the tower"
        p. 93 - I wonder if she is down there "in the shadow of the tower"
        p. 93 - there was no one "in the shadow of the tower"
        p. 140 - "in the shadow of the tower" Josy was restored
        p. 143 - girls were standing "in the shadow of the tower"
        p. 214 - "shadows" fell across ... "beneath the shadow of the tower"
        p. 214 - down "in the shadow of the Tower" she saw movement
        p. 214 - I just saw them "in the shadow of the tower" 

I almost had to wonder if perhaps this phrase should not become a drinking game (although, if it did, I think most readers would become quite drunk before they finished the book!).  

Of these first three books in the Dana Girls' series, I have to admit, this was my least favorite.  There was too much going on, a couple of the mysteries were solved as mere afterthoughts in the last three pages of the book, and the miraculous manner in which Josy went from grotesque to attractive by just donning a beautiful dress was too much for me. Plus, I miss the practical jokes / pranks that the Danas and Lettie pull on one another.  This particular book only had one attempt at a joke, and the sisters easily defeated it.  We will have to wait and see what McFarlane's final Dana Girls book has in store when we read the next book in this series!
 
RATING:  7 radio dramas set on the Florida coast out of 10 for at least trying something different with this mystery - a handicapped child, a village of superstitious folk, a sleazy con artist, a missing relative, and a thousand dollar bill!

Tuesday, May 6, 2025

Dana Girls Mystery Stories No. 2 - The Secret at Lone Tree Cottage

The journey through the Dana Girls Mystery Stories continues with this second book, published alongside By the Light of the Study Lamp and In the Shadow of the Tower as the breeder set for this series in 1934.  Written by Leslie McFarlane, author of original Hardy Boys stories, this is the second of the first four books in the series that he wrote (after which, Mildred Wirt took over the authorship of the series).  From everything I've read and heard, McFarlane did not enjoy writing this series at all; yet, what I find strange, is that I like these stories far better than I do his Hardy Boys stories (don't shoot me, Pam!).  I feel like Louise and Jean Dana have a lot more personality than the Hardys, and the constant antagonism between the Danas and Lettie Briggs is so much fun to read!  This second book serves as a great follow up to the sisters' first mystery.
 
The Secret at Lone Tree Cottage
takes place a few months after the conclusion of the first mystery.  In Study Lamp, the girls were just starting their new school year at Starhurst; in this book, it is November (p. 96), and the Thanksgiving holidays are just around the corner (p. 144). I like this type of continuity in a series, and it appears the Syndicate made this decision to follow the seasons, as the reference to Thanksgiving appears in the outline written by Harriet Stratemeyer Adams (which outline, it must be noted, was considerably more detailed and quite a bit longer than Edna's outline for the previous book!).  Moving time forward in a sequential manner such as this gives the books a sense of realism that helps overcome the fact that the Danas (like the Hardys, Nancy, and so many other series sleuths) never actually age, despite moving through the seasons and holidays year after year after year after year.  Ruth Fielding and Judy Bolton are just two of the few series book sleuths who actually did age as their respective series progressed.
 
The mystery this time around involves their English teacher, Miss Amy Tisdale, who disappears after receiving a strange note in class one day.  Louise and Jean think it odd, and so they decide to track down their teacher, especially after her parents reveal that Miss Tisdale did not come for a visit over the weekend as she normally does.  The Danas are already aware that Miss Tisdale has a twin sister, Alice, that is estranged from the family, and when following up on a lead in the small town of Hilton, the girls discover Mrs. Alice Brixton, their teacher's twin!  Of course, they discover the woman after finding her toddler daughter lost in the woods on the way to Hilton.  It is those series book coincidences that always help our favorite sleuths solve their mysteries!
 
It is a fairly interesting mystery, with somewhat cryptic clues, including coded messages that Miss Tisdale sends to her teacher where one must read every fourth word of the note in order to get the "real" message being sent!  The girls are determined to locate Miss Tisdale, even engaging the assistance of their Uncle Ned, who is only too willing to drive from Oak Falls to Penfield to help his nieces.  The fact that the kidnapper - one Sol Tepper (p. 36) - portrays himself as the injured party, having been cheated out of money by his former business partner, Mrs. Brixon's deceased husband, leaves the readers and the Dana Girls wondering how far he will go in order to get what he believes he is deserved. Ultimately, he also kidnaps Mrs. Brixton's young daughter to use both her and Miss Tisdale as bargaining chips.  When you stop and think about that, it makes you realize just how "adult" of a story this mystery could truly be!
 
As with McFarlane's first entry into the Dana Girls' series, this second book also features some pranks played between the Danas and Lettie Briggs. When the sisters leave Miss Tisdale's car parked just outside the school's entrance, Lettie secretly moves it, so that the Danas believe the car has been stolen (pp. 65); later, when a private detective hired by Miss Tisdale's mother shows up at the school to talk with the Danas, Jean informs Lettie a man is there to see her, causing the girl to make a fool of herself before the private detective (pp. 119-21); and later yet, when the sisters purchase all the food necessary to make a good Thanksgiving dinner for Mrs. Brixton and her daughter, Lettie slyly steal the food and replaces it with rocks inside the container (pp. 151-53).  What is odd about the last trick is that the "mystery of the vanished dinner was forgotten (p. 154), and Lettie is never truly revealed as the culprit or made to reveal what she did with the food (did she throw it out? did she give it to the cook? did she simply eat it herself?).
 
And since we are on the topic of the Danas driving Miss Tisdale's car, for two girls who do not have a car of their own, they certainly manage to find transportation to use in the course of solving mysteries.  In the first book, they had free use of Mrs. Grantland's car, and now, in this story, they are given use of Miss Tisdale's car until they are able to locate the missing teacher.  Although, before they gain use of the car in this book, they are forced to walk quite a distance to the town of Hilton in order to follow in the steps of their teacher (pp. 16-17).  McFarlane seems to be spatially-impaired in his storytelling, just as Mildred Wirt was time-impaired, as he writes about Louise and Jean walking distances in a relatively short amount of time, but later in the same book, he describes how they drive these distances, and the driving takes a bit of time (in the first mystery, it was their trips to the park; in this mystery, it is the girls' trips to Hilton).  
 
McFarlane does include some references to Charles Dickens' classic tale, David Copperfield, which is a book that Jean is having to study in her English class (p. 10).  The book is mentioned several times throughout the story, and in one instance, makes a point of discussing the tempest scenes from the book, with Jean shuddering at "what a squall that was" (p. 72).  This is a bit of foreshadowing (given McFarlane in the outline), since the girls, along with their Uncle Ned, later face quite a dastardly squall of their own while going up and down the river next to Hilton in search of Miss. Tisdale (pp. 98-99).  Of course, that buffeting snowstorm is not their only danger, because they are also faced with a speedboat heading straight for them, threatening to crash right into them (p. 99).  It is quite the coincidence, since McFarlane had a similar near-miss of a boating accident in The Hardy Boys' The Mystery of Cabin Island, only that was with ice boats instead of speedboats.  However, the boat incident in this book is detailed in the outline, so one cannot say McFarlane was simply recycling ideas - he was merely following the outline.
 
One thing NOT in the outline that McFarlane seems to enjoy doing is inserting the title of his mysteries into the story itself.  If you recall, at the end of the first book, the comment was made how the Danas would never forget how precious the jewels looked "by the light of the study lamp."  In this book, not only does Uncle Ned remark at the end that they must hurry home to Aunt Harriet because she will want to hear all about "the secret at Lone Tree Cottage" (p. 218), but earlier in the book, the author has the girls find their uncle waiting for them in their dorm room, reaching a newspaper "by the light of the study lamp" (p. 154).  I will be curious to see if, in the third book, McFarlane manages to find a way to integrate all three titles into his story!
 
Finally, something that takes place in the story I can't ignore is when Jean and Louise, along with Mrs. Crandall, come across a cabin deep in the woods, not far from the river.  They see Miss Tisdale in an upstairs window, but they are too far away to hear her or for her to hear them.  So, Jean quickly says, "I'll try sign language" (p. 130), at which point she holds "up her hands and [makes] motions with her fingers such as deaf mutes use" (p. 130).  At no time has it ever been mentioned that Jean knows actual sign language, nor do I ever recall her using it again over the course of this series.  I know people often joke about how Nancy Drew can do anything, knows every language, etc.; but I was not aware that the Dana Girls also had that same gift.  Being an interpreter for the deaf and knowing American Sign Language, this scene stuck out to me, and I wish the Stratemeyers had made use of this talent in Jean and wrote a story that actually did involve some deaf characters, so that Jean could have truly made use of her gift.
 
The internal illustrations are once again provided by Ferdinand E. Warren, and a couple of them offer up some dramatic scenes - from Miss Tisdale narrowly missing a man waiting in the road, to the girls and Mrs. Crandall facing off against some rather vicious guard dogs, to Jean being pushed off of a moving vehicle!  The details of the illustrations from these early series books are so vibrant, and it is a shame they eventually moved away from fully painted illustrations to simple like pictures that eventually began to resemble nothing much more than stick figure drawings.  Warren also provided the "shadow" illustrations for the cover collage. I am not sure who provided the cover art when the format was changed to the wrap-spine edition; however, this book did have a brief run as a free volume during Grosset & Dunlap's "This Volume Free" promotion, where anyone buying the first book in the series would get the second volume for free.
 
This second volume of the Dana Girls Mystery Stories proved to be just as entertaining as the first, and I am enjoying reading a series where the girls do not necessarily have all of the freedoms of their contemporaries, such as Nancy Drew and the Hardy Boys - while the girls do seem to come and go as they please quite a bit, those choices are not always without consequences, and often times it takes begging and pleadings, or for intervention by their Uncle Ned, before they can gain permission for their excursions.  I also am enjoying the playfulness of Jean, the spitefulness of Lettie, and the sternness of Mrs. Crandall.  These characters feel a bit more than just cardboard, copy-cutouts of Nancy Drew or the Hardy Boys.  The Dana Girls have their own personalities with restrictions that seem similar to Trixie Belden than other Stratemeyer sleuths!
 
One final note - it appears there was a spelling error on one of the internal illustrations with the first printing.  The scene where Jean jumps on the running board of Tepper's car, and he then pushes her off before he gets going (page 186) - in the first printing, the tag line below the illustration says he "threw JOAN from the machine" rather than "JEAN."  It was obviously caught right away, because the printings thereafter show the correct spelling her name as "JEAN."   As you can see from the illustration to the right, the name is "JOAN" rather than "JEAN." Compare that with the corrected illustration shown above in this blog post.  Not sure if this was a publisher error or an editor's error (honestly, I'm not even sure who creates these tagline for the internal illustrations); but I think this is the first time I've ever seen a series book with a glaring error like this on an illustration.  Definitely an oddity to keep en eye out for!
 
RATING:  8 games of mental algebra out of 10 for a fairly challenging mystery that was less about the "whodunnit" and more about finding the missing person!

Wednesday, April 9, 2025

Dana Girls Mystery Stories No. 1 - By the Light of the Study Lamp

Now that we finished the Penny Parker series, our reading group tossed around ideas on what series to start on next, and those spectacular sister sleuths, The Dana Girls, won the vote.  Looking back, the idea for the Dana Girls came shortly after the success of Nancy Drew in 1930.  In August 1932, Grosset & Dunlap agreed to move forward with another series written under the pseudonym of "Carolyn Keene" - after all, her Nancy Drew series was a success, so why not take advantage of that author's name while the property was still hot?  It was not until December 1932, however, that Harriet Stratemeyer Adams wrote to Syndicate ghostwriter Leslie McFarlane to ask if he was interested in writing books for a new girls' series.  McFarlane, best known for his work on the Stratemeyer's other popular series, The Hardy Boys, agreed to take on the project (he needed the money).  Thus, in January 1933, McFarlane received a sample book (which was none other than a copy of the first Nancy Drew mystery, The Secret of the Old Clock), as well as the outline written by Edna Stratemeyer Squier.  And with that, The Dana Girls were born!
 
By the Light of the Study Lamp
is the first of The Dana Girls Mystery Stories, published in 1934, along with the second and third books of the breeder set.  The title is definitely not what one would consider a typical mystery title - there is no "mystery" or "clue" or "secret" anywhere in the name! - but it certainly conjures up some unusual, almost gothic imagery.  In fact, the 1949 wrap-spine dust jacket cover for this book (which was taken from the third internal illustration of the original printing) provides an almost gothic scene - a dark mansion in the background, with a light in the upper window, and a young girl (well, in this case, two young girls) in the foreground.  And, of course, the story itself has some minor gothic tropes, what with the hidden panels, double identities, and the missing fortune.  The mystery itself, though, is not gothic at all.

McFarlane does a decent job introducing all of these new characters to his readers.  Louise Dana is "a pretty, dark-haired girl of seventeen" (p. 1), while her sister Jean has "fair hair" (p. 1).  The girls are described as orphans, living with their Uncle Ned and Aunt Harriet (p. 3).  We know from outlines and other documents that the Syndicate provided the character names, but one has to wonder if the names for the uncle and aunt did not come from Edward Stratemeyer ("Ned") and his daughter, Harriet Stratemeyer Adams ("Harriet").  It would be too much of a coincidence for them not to be.  In any event, Uncle Ned is the girls' "bluff, elderly relative" who was the "captain of the great Atlantic liner Balaksa" (p. 3).  Their Aunt Harriet is "a good-natured, attractive maiden lady in her middle forties" (p. 3).  This is one of those rare times when a series book plainly sets forth the age of on their adults - usually they are simply described as older or elderly or middle-aged or some other vague reference.  Readers are also introduced to Ben Harrow, the "stuttering hired man" who is also said to be clumsy (p. 3), as well as Cora Appel, the Danas' maid whose "aggravating stupidity ... kept life interesting for Aunt Harriet" (p. 3).   The maid, who is affectionately nicknamed "Applecore" by the girls, is also described as "buxom" and "red-cheeked" (p. 6).   Buxom, by definition, means a plump woman, normally one with large breasts.  I was surprised to see such a description in a children's series book, but being written by a man, I suppose it should not be surprising that such an attribute would be focused upon. And with that, readers are prepared to enter the world of The Dana Girls and follow along as they find themselves embroiled in their very first mystery!
 
The mystery begins by the end of chapter one, when an antique lamp that Uncle Ned had delivered to the house as a gift for Louise and Jean before they head back to school at Starhurst School for Girls is stolen.  The girls decide to try and follow the thief, which takes them into Oak Falls to a rather seedy second hand shop owned by Jake Garbone, who is described as a "stout, swarthy individual with beetling eyebrows, dark eyes, nose like a beak, [and a] thin, cruel mouth" (p. 17).  The description alone is enough to set off warning signals in the reader's mind that this man is going to be a villain.  And that name - "Garbone."  Perhaps it was a deviation of the name, Paul Bonnaventure Carbone, who was a well-known criminal in the Marseille underworld from the 1920s until the 1940s, when he died.  In any event, the girls head back home by taking the river road, which runs along Oak River, described as "a rough, tumultuous body of water that rin swiftly between high, rocky shores that became sheer cliffs in many places ... [and] ended in the roaring cataract known as Oak Falls, a wild, fifty-foot plunge of foaming water" (p. 25).  Interestingly, there is a real town of Penfield (where Starhurst is located) in New York, which has a park that runs along Irondequoit Creek, "where it drops over 90 feet in the course of one mile. The relatively steep drop in an otherwise flat region leads to some interesting rapids along its path towards Irondequoit Bay and eventually Lake Ontario" (Waterfalls - Channing H Philbrick Park).  Is it possible this area was used as the inspiration for the fictional Oak Falls and its river and waterfall?  This trip ultimately leads them to save the life of a man and his dog - the man turning out to be a friend of Uncle Ned's who becomes a very integral part of the mystery.  The dog, on the other hand, must be supernaturally enhanced, as the girls see the dog hit by a car, watch as it flies through the air; in fact, McFarlane describes the scene by saying the dog was struck with such force that it was thrown clear of the road, rolled down the side of the cliff, and lands with force in the torrent of water below (p. 27).  Yet, miraculously, that dog walks away without one scratch!
 
Louise and Jean head off to Starthurst, where it turns out they are in the same grade (even though Jean is one year younger than Louise - sort of a mirror version of the Hardys, who were one year apart, yet in the same grade).  They meet four of their friends - Nell Carson, Doris Harland, Ann Freeman, and Margaret Glenn - on the train to Penfield.  It is rather amusing that the names of the four friends also happen to have connections to series books:  NELL Speed is a pseudonym used by the Syndicate; DORIS Force is a four-book series written by the Syndicate; ANN Sterling is another series; and MARGARET Penrose is yet another pseudonym.  Again, it could simply be a coincidence (I mean, let's face it, these series books basically depend on coincidences to get the mysteries solved!), but in real life, coincidences are few and far between.  Regardless, the train also furthers the mystery, when the girls witness a gypsy-like woman try to steal a wealthy woman's suitcase (pp. 60-61) and are able to prevent the theft.  The woman, Mrs. Grantland, ultimately plays an important part in the story, as it is revealed an expensive ring of hers was taken by the gypsy, and she aids the girls by allowing them use of her car (which is rather surprising, since she really does not know them - I suppose people were far more trusting back in the 1930s than they are now!).
 
At the school, readers are introduced to Mr. and Mrs. Crandall, who operate the school.  Mrs. Crandall is basically the one in charge, as her husband is more focused on a book he is writing about Ancient Greece (p. 62).  The name "Crandall" has both Irish and Welsh origins, meaning "ravine" or "iron dell," or in some cases, interpreted as "water course."  This is an interesting choice of names, considering the girls' earlier rescue of Franklin Starr from the rapids of Oak River just a few chapters earlier!  And here we also get to meet, for the first time, a character that plays an important part in the Dana Girls' lives through the rest of the series - the one, the only, Lettie Briggs!  The Dana Girls' life-long nemesis is said to be "a tall, anaemic girl whose arrogant, snobbish manner" made her unpopular with the girls at the school (p. 63), and she makes it clear her father is worth $10 million (p. 65), which is unbelievable for that time, as that would equate to more than $230 million in today's dollars!
 
The mystery heats up when the girls stumble upon their lamp at a thrift store in Penfield, where they buy it back (much to Lettie's chagrin!) and put it in their room at Starhurst (which also happens to be the very room Lettie thought she was going to get - yet one more reason for her to hate the Danas!).  The lamp seems to hold a lot of interest for a lot of people.  Lettie wants the lamp for herself, having seen it in the shop but not wanting to pay $10 for it; a handyman at the school seems to have taken a keen interest in the lamp, as the girls catch him looking at the lamp every time he is in their room (as depicted in the frontis piece illustration); and even Garbone and the gyspy woman, who turns out to be his sister, Fay Violette, are anxious to buy back the lamp, indicating it was sold to the thrift store by mistake and rightfully belongs to them. That name, Fay Violette, is interesting and begs the question if it was not perhaps taken from the song "Pretty Violette," which was sung by a young woman named Fay Templeton in New York during the late 1800s and early 1900s.  Again, the coincidence and timing are a bit much to be pushed asie.
 
Getting back to the focal point of the mystery, Lettie does manager to get her hands on the lamp, and as a trick, she gives it to the school's cook as a gift; the Danas find out and get it back, but Jean, as a way to get even, adds some very hot red pepper to some cream puffs the cook has just made and gives them to Lettie and her toady friend, Ina Mason (p. 106).  This is quite amusing, as you would never see Nancy or her friends taking such action against someone who wronged them.  This actually gives Louise and Jean a little bit more personality than their sister sleuths, as it reveals a more natural, human side to their characters. 
 
The story evolves as the Danas, besides trying to learn the secret of the study lamp, also seek to aid a young girl at their school, Evelyn Starr, who is on the verge of having to leave due to a lack of money.  Yes, this turns out to be Franklin Starr's little sister (another coincidence!  what a shock!), and it eventually all ties into that antique study lamp, which provides Evelyn Starr with the means to stay at Starhurst and sets up her and her brother for many years to come.  And, oh yeah, that dastardly Jake Garbone and his thieving sister both end up in police custody, where they belong, and Mrs. Grantland's expensive ring is recovered and returned to her.  All in all, the Danas do a superb job of wrapping up their first mystery, and McFarlane finds a way to integrate the title into the very last line of the book, as Louise says, "I'll never forget how those precious jewels looked by the light of the study lamp" (p. 215).  However, just because they solve the mystery in spectacular fashion does not mean the story does not have some rather ... questionable ... moments!  Probably one of the biggest takes place in Chapter Nineteen, when Jean walks to the telegraph office in Penfield to send a message to Uncle Ned; when she returns to the school, she tells Louise she came back by way of the park where she saw Jake Garbone (p. 157).  The girls want to catch the man, so they borrow Mrs. Grantland's car (p. 158), and Louise drives the car through the traffic of Penfield until they are "speeding along the highway" that leads out of Penfield to get to the park before Garbone leaves (p. 159).  Now, I ask - how in the world did Jean walk, or even run, by the park and get back to the school so quickly, whereas the Danas are forced to use a car and drive outside of Penfield in order to get to that very same park to catch Garbone before he leaves?  Is Jean bionic, by chance, and she can run as fast as any car can drive?  Either that, or the distance and timing somehow changed between Jean's visit to the park and the girls' trip back to the park.
 
I will say, though, the girls' trip to the park does warrant a mention, as it is there the girls discover a pocket watch dropped by Garbone, which coincidentally (here we go again!) has an inscription to Franklin Starr.  The title to that particular chapter happens to be "The Clue of the Watch" - a title that, perhaps, pokes a little fun at the title to the very first Nancy Drew book, The Secret in the Old Clock?  And the internal illustration for that scene, when Garbone happens across the girls just as they discover the watch, bears an uncanny resemblance to an illustration from the Nancy Drew book, The Password to Larkspur Lane (p. 101), where Nancy is kneeling on the ground as a man comes barging through the bushes towards her.  In fact, oddly enough, another illustration in this book (from page 112) showing the girls watching as a man creeps up on the school is extremely similar to another illustration from Larkspur Lane (p. 9), where Nancy and Hannah are watching a man running up to the front door of the Drew house.  Larkspur Lane came out just one year prior to this book, so the question becomes: is it simply coincidence (again????) or did artist Ferdinand E. Warren, who illustrated this first Dana Girls mystery, take some inspiration from those earlier illustrations.  
 
And while we are looking at the illustrations from this book, the fourth illustration, which shows the Danas looking into Mr. Garbone's second hand store through the front window, is somewhat the same as one of the later illustrations in The Clue in the Old Album, when  Nancy, George, and Bess are looking through the window of the antique store and see one of Mrs. Struther's dolls.  Now, there is no denying that Warren's illustrations in this book are gorgeous.  The black and white drawings are highly detailed (take a look at the scene of the sisters looking into Garbone's store for an example - the backwards lettering on the window, all of the items on the window shelf, the car in the background, the stores across the street, the clothing, the overhead lamp, etc.), and the girls (Jean and Louise) look far closer to their ages than Nancy and her friends do in the Tandy illustrations throughout those early Nancy Drew books (where Nancy and her friends appear to be closer to 30 than 18!).  Warren (1899 - 1981) was a rather well-known artist later, being commissioned as the only artist to ever paint a posed portrait of the poet, Robert Frost.  Later still, he was chosen by NASA to paint the launch of Apollo 14, a rather prestigious honor!  He received numerous awards for his work, and he has paintings displayed in numerous galleries throughout the U.S.
 
I realize this post is a bit longer than normal, but there was so much to say about this book.  Before I close, I would be remiss if I did not mention the trouble McFarlane had in writing the book.  While records show that it only took him a month to write the book (from January 7, 1933 to February 4, 1933), they also reveal he had difficulty getting through the writing - sometimes to the point where he was "utterly fed up and discouraged" with the book!  It was during this period of writing By the Light of the Study Lamp that McFarlane's wife gave birth to their daughter, which may have been part of the reason he kept plugging away at the book and got it finished - so he could get the payment needed to pay bills!  In a letter from the Syndicate after receiving the manuscript, McFarlane was told they liked the story, describing it as "excellent" - and they informed him they would hear back within a week as to the next story.  And, thus, The Dana Girls Mystery Stories were born!
 
RATING:   8 dark skirts and matching sweaters out of 10 for a rather well-fleshed out opening mystery for Louise and Jean Dana, with a some rather intense, dangerous, and even shockingly violent moments!