Nancy Drew Mystery Stories # 144 - The E-Mail Mystery

 "Nancy uncovers intrigue on the internet ... and the password is danger!" (cover blurb)

 

 "Nancy goes on-line and keys into a criminal conspiracy" (back cover blurb)

 

This book is definitely a product of its time!  While it moves Nancy further into the technological age, what with the e-mail and internet usage, it is certainly date specific, with its talk of floppy disks and dial-up modems! First published in August 1998, which was defined by slow, audible 56k dial-up modems, where you had to pay monthly fees for access to the internet through sites such as AOL and where you communicated in group chat rooms or message boards.  The internet was nothing like it is today; so, naturally, a book published in that time and read by today's readers would seem greatly antiquated (even though it was less than 30 years old at this point!).  That being said, it was a fun read, mostly because in addition to the e-mail/internet focus, but also the fact that it is set in Carson Drew's law office and the mystery itself pertains to some of his legal cases!

 

The E-Mail Mystery finds Nancy accepting a short summer position at her father's firm to help transfer some closed files off of the office computer system and onto portable disks.  "Summer vacation at last!" she exclaims at the opening of the story (p. 1), and she is excited at the prospect of going sailing with George up in Bridgehaven (p. 2), a fictional city that is apparently not far from River Heights.  Before she goes, however, she gets caught up in a mystery at her father's office - it seems several recent clients have all demanded Mr. Drew accept exceptionally low settlement offers on their cases just shortly after he starts to represent them.  The only apparent connection between the cases is that all of them have the same law firm representing the insurance companies: Williams and Brown.  While Mr. Drew thinks it is a coincidence, Nancy smells a mystery!  Thus, her summer internship begins, and she heads to her father's law firm to find out what is really going on!

I have to applaud the ghostwriter for this book, Denise Hildago, as she brings back Carson Drew's legal secretary and assistant, Miss Hanson, who long-time Nancy Drew fans will recognize from her appearances in The Bungalow Mystery, The Clue of the Tapping Heels, The Spider Sapphire Mystery, The Mysterious Mannequin, Clue in the Ancient Disguise, and The Mysterious Image.  It is nice to see some continuity with those pre-Simon & Schuster-owned days.  In addition, Nancy does something she says she has not done since she was in the third-grade: brings "out an old blue notebook" and writes down a list of clues and suspects (pp. 112-14).  This, obviously, is a reference to the Nancy Drew Notebooks series, which ran from 1994 - 2005, having been first published just four years prior to this one seeing print.  Thus, the author was definitely tying in some continuity from the various series.  Even the e-mail and cyber cafe plot-points hearken back to the final Nancy Drew Files mystery, Crime at the Ch@t Cafe, published just one year before this one.  The plot of this book, however, differs greatly from that of the final Files book.

 

The mystery gets underway when Nancy discovers that someone at her father's firm has sent e-mails to the Williams and Brown law firm on the very same day that each client engaged her father's services.  She is unable to discover what exactly was sent to the other firm, but the fact that each case settled so quickly thereafter, and each of those clients now refuse to talk with her father sets off any number of alarms in Nancy's mind.  The question is - who did it?  Was it Blaine Warner, Mr. Drew's new associate at the firm?  She graduated top of her class, wrote for the law review, and won a number of mock trials.  Is the fact that she went to school with the son of one of the partners at Williams and Brown a telling clue?  Or was it Henry Yi, Mr. Drew's new paralegal?  He's a hot shot computer whiz, who is also quite nosy, always sticking his nose into everyone else's business - plus, he knows the passwords of everyone in the office!  Or was it Byron Thomas, the summer intern?  He is a quiet, nervous young man who is nicknamed "the poet" because of his name and love of poetry.  Is his nervous nature a product of his shyness, or is he hiding something?  When Nancy, with Bess's help, learns the identity of the e-mail sender was Miss Hanson - does that mean Mr. Drew's secretary, after so many years of loyalty, would betray her employer?

 

While we are on the subject of Bess, let's talk about that sudden knowledge of computers and the internet that Bess has! It appears in this book Bess "has joined an Internet chat group about historical and contemporary romance novels" and that being "on-line was so interesting to her that she earned all about computers, communication systems, Internet links, Web browsers - all that stuff" (p. 10).  With George out of the picture in this story, Bess manages to develop some skills, other than eating, that can help Nancy solve the mystery!  It is funny that Bess gets the computer skills here, but when S&S rebooted the series in 2004 with the Nancy Drew, Girl Detective series, it was George that suddenly had the computer skills, while Bess became more of a mechanic.  Not sure which version I prefer - in either case, it does expand the character somewhat, and give her more depth than just someone who is always on a diet!  Plus, the skill really comes in handy in this particular mystery, as even Nancy admits she knows very little about e-mails and internet (which opens the door for the author to have Bess explain quite a bit about online communication throughout the story).

 

A rather unusual reference in the book is the name of a restaurant that John Brown Jr. suggests to his father as a place for lunch:  Steak and Ale (p. 25).  This is actually a real restaurant, that was founded in 1966 and eventually went out of business due to bankruptcy in the early 2000s (although a quick search online shows that a new Steak and Ale opened in 2024 in Minnesota!).  It's not very often that a Nancy Drew mystery uses real locations, such as restaurants, within the stories.  The restaurant plays a rather important part, as well, as Nancy happens to see some of her suspects at the restaurant, wondering just which one is actually working with the Williams and Brown law firm.  Another name brand reference comes in the form of a joke made by Henry, when he startles Nancy while she is the copy room.  She responds with "Oh, Henry," to which the young paralegal quickly retorts, "No, that's a candy bar" (p. 59).  Oh Henry! was a candy bar containing peanuts, caramel, and fudge that was sold in the U.S. up until 2019 (with a slightly different version still manufactured and sold in Canada).  Again, it is surprising to see the author use specific brand names.

 

The final "brand name" use was when Nancy learns that Byron, the summer intern, has been going online to use Lexis-Nexis to perform legal research (p. 74).  Working as a paralegal myself, I am very familiar with the platform, and I was not aware that it was available online as far back as 1998!  I remember using Westlaw first, and later learning about the online offerings of Lexis-Nexis.  A quick search online reveals that Lexis-Nexis began making legal documents accessible online as early as the mid-1970s!  Thus, I learned something new about my own profession by reading this Nancy Drew novel!  And I will say this was probably what I enjoyed most about reading this book, was the legal aspects of the story.  The author did get most of the facts correct about legal research, the civil process, and client confidentiality.

 

And, okay, I lied.  There is one more "brand name" reference, although whether it was intentional or a joking nod, I'm not sure.  When Bess is helping Nancy find out who was e-mailing the opposing law firm, she sets up a new screen-name for them to use while communicating online.  They debate about whether to use "B and N, for Bess and Nancy" or "N and B, for Nancy and Bess" - and they ultimately settle on "B&N" (p. 82).  I found this humorous, as any book lover will immediately recognize that as the shorthand name of Barnes & Noble booksellers, which actually began using "B&N" in May of 1997, when they launched their online website, BN.com.  I would be curious to know if the author did that intentionally as a nod to the store that sold Nancy Drew books, or was it simply pure coincidence?

 

The cover art, depicting a scene straight off of page 105 when Nancy is being followed as she leaves a cyber cafe, holding a rose and some important papers, is once again provided by Ernie Norcia.  I find Norcia's art to be very detailed, and his renditions of Nancy to be truly beautiful (although I wish he gave her hair a more reddish tint).  The model for this cover appears to be the same model used for a number of the Files covers, making me wonder if perhaps the model was somehow contracted by Simon & Schuster, or whatever company they used to obtain their cover art, since her likeness appears in both the Mystery Stories and Files series.

 

This is another one of those digests that rates high on the scale in my book - great story, some crafty plotting, and the legal-aspect was definitely an added plus!

 

RATING:  9 pancakes covered in motor oil out of 10 for bringing Nancy back into a less dangerous world of legal-intrigue mysteries with a bit of humor thrown in to keep it light!  

 

Short Lived Comics Series #36 -The Young Lawyers (Dell Comics)

This 2-issue comic book series is something I chanced upon some time ago at a local convention.  I happened across the second issue for a relatively cheap price (the comic was not in perfect condition, mind you), and I could not pass it up.  As a paralegal myself, having worked for lawyers for some time, I am always drawn to comic books set in the legal realm.  With the photo cover, the identification of the actors on the cover, and the copyright to Paramount Pictures Corporation and Crane Productions, Inc. down in the bottom right corner, I assumed it was based on a television show - and I was right!  So, after some time, I finally found the first issue at a comic shop.  With both issues now in hand, I sat down to read them, and was pleasantly surprised to find out how much I really liked the stories.  With that in mind, I had to go back and see what I could find out about the old TV show...

 

The Young Lawyers was issued in late 1970, early 1971 with cover dates of January 1971 (issue 1) and April 1971 (issue 2).  It was based upon a vintage television show that ran on ABC from September 21, 1970 to March 24, 1971, for a total of twenty-four episodes.  The comic, like the television show, centers on a legal aid center in Boston, called the "Neighborhood Law Office" (or NLO for short), established to help those in need who cannot afford legal help.  The three central characters are David Barrett (as portrayed by Lee J. Cobb), an established lawyer who gives guidance to young law school students who gain experience by representing real cases while they are going to school; Aaron Silverman (as portrayed by Zalman King),  a zealous student with lofty ideas of helping all of the underprivileged and always rooting for the underdog; and Pat Walters (as portrayed by Judy Pace), an African-American woman studying law in an effort to break stereotypes and do some good in the world.

 

As with pretty much all of the Dell Comics published at the time, there are no credits given for writers, artists, colorists, letterers, editors, or anyone else associated with the comic series; however, the Grand Comicbook Database website (The Young Lawyers) indicates Jose Delbo, who is probably most recognized for his work on DC Comics' Wonder Woman title for quite a long run in the 1970s and early '80s, as well as Thundercats and Transformers for Marvel Comics.  The art does strongly resemble Delbo's work, and it is clear the same artist did both stories in both issues, because the characters appearances are consistent throughout.  I would love to know who the writer was, though, because the stories are very much in sync with the stories from the television show - very topical and very much in line with the "buck the system" thinking of the time.

 

The two stories in the first issue are "Team Spirit" and "Kids are People."  The first story is about a young football player (whose name happens to be Jimmy Carter - who was not our President until seven years after this comic came out!) who is injured during a game and may be paralyzed.  The boy who tackled him is being accused of purposefully injuring him the previous day so that he can get the spotlight with the talent scouts who are at the game.  Aaron goes to bat for the accused boy, and with Pat's help (since the injured boy happens to be African-American), they are able to broker peace between the boys and get them both back on the field.  The second story involves a young boy named Angel Rivera who is accused of stealing a typewriter by a store owner.  The boy's reputation is being ruined, and his chance at getting into a prestigious school is lost because of the rumors.  Barrett, Aaron, and Pat all learn a lesson in this story, as they are not so quick to believe the boy's story, and when the truth does come out, it is the three lawyers who are eating crow!

 

The second issue features two more stories:  "Under the Skin" and "Explosive Justice."  In the first tale, a biker is unjustly and unfairly treated by everyone, no matter where he goes, and he comes to the NLO with the hopes of suing "the People of the United States" for denying him his rights under the Ninth Amendment.  Aaron goes for a bike ride with the man who calls himself Captain Freedom, and he sees first hand the way he is treated, merely because of his appearance - long hair, sunglasses, biker clothes.  Even the police are seen to hassle the man.  Aaron believes there is some cause for a lawsuit, but before it can be filed, Captain Freedom takes off, thanking the NLO, and Aaron specifically, for proving there were still good people in the world.  In the second tale, the NLO is the victim of a vicious bomb attack (thankfully at night, when no one was there), and our three main characters must sift through the firm's history to determine which client may want to seek vengeance.  Aaron is attacked one night when he goes back to the office, and the next day, a file is missing - the file of a former client who the NLO defended for allegedly bombing a government office!  As it turns out, that was a red herring, and the real culprit is someone much closer to home!

 

After reading these two issues, I was curious about the television show, so I did some searching and found some episodes available on YouTube.  The original pilot movie aired in October 1969, a year before the actual series began, and it featured Jason Evers as Michael Cannon, a corporate lawyer who leaves his firm to become the director at the NLO.  Zalman King plays Aaron, but Judy Pace's character is named Anne, and there is an additional law student, David Harrison (played by Tom Holland - no, not THAT Tom Holland).  The set up for the show is pretty much the same, but the story definitely gives ample time to both the legal story and the individual characters' characterization.  By the end of that pilot film, you actually have a feel for all four of the main characters.  In the first episode of the ongoing show, which aired in September 1970, Evers and Holland are gone, and Lee J. Cobb is in as new director, David Barrett.  There is absolutely no explanation for the change in characters, no reference at all to Cannon or Harrison.  Comparing the two, I honestly liked the initial pilot film far better than I did the first episode of the ongoing series.  The show is available on DVD on Amazon, so I'm going to buy that and watch the remaining 23 episodes to see if the characterization gets better as the series progresses (I know at some point a fourth main character is added to the series - Chris Blake, as portrayed by Philip Clark.

 

The comic series only features the main three characters from the regular series - Barrett, Aaron, and Pat.  However, in the second story of the first issue, someone got confused, because Barrett refers to Pat as "Anne," which was the character's name in the original pilot film.  They only use that name once, and, in fact, they never call the character by her name again in the entire story.  By the second issue, both stories refer to her as "Pat," her given name in the television series.  Otherwise, I thought both issues were pretty much flawless, capturing the feel and the look of the TV show, and providing some interesting, thought-provoking stories that today may seem dated, but back in the early 1970s would have been considered quite progressive. 

 

Definitely a series worth reading, and it's a shame it only lasted two issues.

 

RATING:  10 tell-tale band-aids on the chin out of 10 for well-written, beautifully drawn comic stories based on a little-known show that is definitely worth a second glance!